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Discovery

Stillness greets the morn Tranquility and depth flutter Beyond the minds eye For Raul's Moreno's "Awaiting dawn contest"!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2010 8:57:00 PM

I like ALL the lines!! BEst of luck in the contest, Laura, Luv, Andrea

David Byrne

Date: 2/19/2010 8:01:00 PM

like the third line

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 7:48:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku entry for Raul's contest.. much good luck .. will look for u in the winners circle.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. P.S. I have company the next four days until Monday so will try to write a new poem for the contest u are sponsoring... thankxxx for coming back and assuming your place among us... as a beautiful lady and wonderful poetess... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2010 6:38:00 PM

"Beyond the minds eye",I like that line very much, best of luck in the contest, Constance, A Rambling Poet

Date: 2/19/2010 3:10:00 PM

I like the serenity in this poem. Has me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/19/2010 1:03:00 PM

Wonderful take on this one Laura, It's great to see so many poets creating magical words on Raul's pictures. REgards: Déirdre

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/19/2010 11:54:00 AM

Hi Laura, Where does he get all of these beautiful pictures? Good luck in the contest. (I plan to enter your free verse contest. I felt like a kid on her birthday when I saw the 1st prize! A real trophy! Now THAT is MOTIVATION! Big SMILES! Love to you. Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 11:18:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Looks like a winner to me. Love, Carol