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Stillness greets the morn
Tranquility and depth flutter
Beyond the minds eye



For Raul's Moreno's "Awaiting dawn contest"!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/19/2010 8:57:00 PM
I like ALL the lines!! BEst of luck in the contest, Laura, Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:01:00 PM
like the third line
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:48:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku entry for Raul's contest.. much good luck .. will look for u in the winners circle.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. P.S. I have company the next four days until Monday so will try to write a new poem for the contest u are sponsoring... thankxxx for coming back and assuming your place among us... as a beautiful lady and wonderful poetess... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/19/2010 6:38:00 PM
"Beyond the minds eye",I like that line very much, best of luck in the contest, Constance, A Rambling Poet
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Date: 2/19/2010 3:10:00 PM
I like the serenity in this poem. Has me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/19/2010 1:03:00 PM
Wonderful take on this one Laura, It's great to see so many poets creating magical words on Raul's pictures. REgards: Déirdre
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Date: 2/19/2010 11:54:00 AM
Hi Laura, Where does he get all of these beautiful pictures? Good luck in the contest. (I plan to enter your free verse contest. I felt like a kid on her birthday when I saw the 1st prize! A real trophy! Now THAT is MOTIVATION! Big SMILES! Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 2/19/2010 11:18:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Looks like a winner to me. Love, Carol
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