Notes About The Poem

Discovery

We found each other again
Above the sea, before golden skies
Shining upon us for miles ahead
Our conversation would never be forgotten

Re-uniting on a bridge we cross
Leaving troubles behind us
With each soft step of forgiveness taken,
We discover what brings us to the other side


4/20/19

Photo #3

Placed 2nd in free verse or Rhyme Poetry in its beauty contest.  Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Congrats Heidi..you are high up there on the best poem chart.
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. Nice to see your comment today :)
Proxenos Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Hi Heidi, I missed this poem - your pic. and your poem speak a world of truths - to move forward, one has to forgive. Congratulations Heidi on your win. Hugs, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Hi Jennifer. Thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.! :)
Pederson Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 10:58 AM
most integral part of healing is forgiving which may restore a loss. so true you are., enjoy the charms of spring.
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Doug. I appreciate your kind feedback Still waiting for our late Spring here :)
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:24 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 3:40 PM
"Leaving troubles behind us With each soft step of forgiveness taken, We discover what brings us to the other side" I saw it kind of the same way as you Heidi. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Sands Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Lindley Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 2:48 PM
In my memories I so oft dream of reuniting with loves of my wild youth. This is truly a very beautiful piece that you have so wondrously create my friend. A fav..
Sands Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment :)
May Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
Sands Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Joseph ,:)
Roper Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Free verse of Vienna and her husband Aldo! The imagery beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate the opportunity and placement :)
Kiser Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Lovely imagery here; good luck in the contest.
Sands Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 8:34 PM
Thank you M.L. :)
May Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Beautiful write Heidi...GL in the Contest..
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Thank you :)
Bavington  Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 8:39 PM
A nice capture of a picture.
Sands Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Thank you Bette :)
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:47 PM
- Lovely poem ... a new beginning - Enjoy your Easter, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice Easter too :)
Pandit Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 12:28 PM
You certainly captured the essence of the photo and the love of two souls...a well written conversation of life well lived..best for a win, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Vijay! Nice to see your comment. I hope you have a nice Easter :)
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