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Disconcerting

At the canine yap concert, Three Dog Bite
There's not one dog port-o-potty in site
so long lines form at a tree
for each mutt and pedigree
It proved quite a long dis-concerting night

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Kim Rodrigues

May 23, 2024 at 3:43 PM

LOL…love it! Well done, Robert!

Duke Beaufort

May 20, 2024 at 5:08 PM

Robert, love the title and the allusions you made. It's very funny!!! I'm laughing and have seen several entries for this contest, which are good but not as clever.

Gershon Wolf

May 19, 2024 at 5:29 PM

O! 'Three Dog Bite!' --- classic parody there. Arf, gw

Robert Gorelick

May 19, 2024 at 5:43 PM

I worked on it doggedly, woof, Wolf!

Ink Empress

May 4, 2024 at 12:06 PM

You have a way with words dear Robert! I love the rhymes and your diction and creativity of your interpretation of this picture prompt! Very well delivered! Pleasure always reading your work! You do this form so well! And its always inspiring! Best wishes for the contest

Robert Gorelick

May 5, 2024 at 12:38 PM

Your comments are always thoughtful and uplifting, made my day brighter. Thank you for your kind visit and support! Cheers, Robert

Silent One

May 3, 2024 at 12:57 PM

This is one of the best ive read for this contest.. Best of luck..

Robert Gorelick

May 5, 2024 at 12:35 PM

Thank you, hope it put a smile on your face, cheers, Robert

Paula Goldsmith

May 3, 2024 at 10:54 AM

I love your fun/cute "Disconcerting" write. "Good Luck" Never heard about Three Dog Bite but love Three Dog Night. Have a fun/wonderful day.............

Robert Gorelick

May 5, 2024 at 12:34 PM

My schnauzer saw them last summer on the same bill as nine-inch tales, lol. Thank you, dear Paula I appreciate your visit. Robert

I Am Anaya

May 3, 2024 at 10:10 AM

Oh this is so good, haha is that "Three Dog Night" parody? LOL! Now I'm thinking Skinny PuPPy great electrictronic band. Like this one the best, love concerts!

I Am Anaya

May 3, 2024 at 10:32 AM

Haha, having written "Doggy Limerick Circus" Book, you know what you are talking or yapping, haha about! This is precious, Robert. Hugs~Anaya

Robert Gorelick

May 3, 2024 at 10:13 AM

Actually a real band and no parody, btw I saw Three Dog Bite in concert with Nine Inch Tales, lol. Glad you enjoyed! Robert