Discombobulated

Old age can be a lonely time for some; friends fade to acquaintances; slip away. Though life's achievements bolster your resume; they've stagnated and morphed into humdrum. The cult of the internet's left you numb; morals decay when hate's a stowaway. And as your future gets bleaker each day, you're left discombobulated, and glum. Children have lost the enjoyment of youth, comparing friends to likes: they interface. Love's still spontaneous; but unlike hate, it's an elusive, transitory truth. Hypocrisy and lies are commonplace; and death becomes a less frightening fate.
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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:46 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Superb write, Emile! Enjoyed ever line. Congrats on your win in Brian’s contest
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 12:55 AM
"as inks fade" - Great comparison. Great writing on age concerns. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Hello Emile, For myself Emile I find that evry time my birthday comes around , I do not feel any different. I have always been this way. do not know why i feel this way, yet i do. Enjoy your day my friend. _Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Hello Emile, I am in my 70's early 70's and feel the same. Enjoy your day my friend.
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:21 AM
Thanks, Darlene, good for you, but I must assume that you have not reached your seventies yet, and when you do, you may experience things differently my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 9:14 AM
And so it is, Emile. You have written a memorable poem for those of us who are reaching the end of our years. Well, so far, I've not become most of the things you mention, but I hold my breath. I believe my poetry helps to preserve my mind. This is fine writing you give us, as usual.
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Thanks, Milit, my Kentucky friend, as I'm reaching the twilight of my years, it seems that life is getting way more complex than it use to be, Emile.
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