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Italian Sonnet
A sonnet consisting of an octave with the rhyme pattern abbaabba followed by six lines with a rhyme pattern of cdecde or cdcdcd. 

Old age can be a lonely time for some, friends become acquaintances, then slip away. Lifelong achievements bolster your resume, but as inks fade, memoirs seem so humdrum. And inexplicable wars leave you numb, for morals sink when love's a stowaway. And as the future gets bleaker each day, you're left discombobulated and glum. Children have lost the innocence of youth, unfamiliar with play; they interface. Love's still spontaneous but unlike hate, it's an elusive, transitory truth. Hypocrisy and lies are commonplace, and death becomes a less frightening fate. (Italian Sonnet) 04/01/2022

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Date: 4/9/2022 3:46:00 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/9/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2022 1:06:00 AM
Superb write, Emile! Enjoyed ever line. Congrats on your win in Brian’s contest
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2022 12:55:00 AM
"as inks fade" - Great comparison. Great writing on age concerns. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 12:18:00 PM
Hello Emile, For myself Emile I find that evry time my birthday comes around , I do not feel any different. I have always been this way. do not know why i feel this way, yet i do. Enjoy your day my friend. _Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2022 10:33:00 AM
Hello Emile, I am in my 70's early 70's and feel the same. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, good for you, but I must assume that you have not reached your seventies yet, and when you do, you may experience things differently my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 9:14:00 AM
And so it is, Emile. You have written a memorable poem for those of us who are reaching the end of our years. Well, so far, I've not become most of the things you mention, but I hold my breath. I believe my poetry helps to preserve my mind. This is fine writing you give us, as usual.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thanks, Milit, my Kentucky friend, as I'm reaching the twilight of my years, it seems that life is getting way more complex than it use to be, Emile.

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