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Disciple of Desire

A fragrant flower left by the glamorous gods For me to praise and panoramically ponder A monolithic maiden rising from the pods As each day my hopes grow fanatically fonder Within the day she is the shimmering summer sun Within the night she is the mated magnetic moon Oh the wishful web that I have spontaneously spun So I may wakefully wallow in my candescent cocoon A congenial carnivorous Venus fly trap Feverously floating toward her fallacious fumes Euphorically embracing as her wings begin to flap As I find myself in one of her tenebrous tombs Left to rootly rot as I rapturously retire For I shall be known as a disciple of desire. July.12.2016 Limerence - Poetry Contest By Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 7/12/2016 9:46:00 PM
You do know your words and use them well. Your mind may be more ordered than you think. Something for you to ponder should you desire from inside your web of wishes. Your poem is not lost and flies even in this Kiwi land though far from your land. I send it back to you all wrapped up in superlatives. David in NZ
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Date: 7/12/2016 10:19:00 PM
I am a creator of all and master of none...when it comes to poetry I'm trapped between being dyslexic and an idiot savant...never read a book(only poetry)...my spelling and grammar in school were atrocious...even till this day lol...and I thank you very much for your kind words David...I shall have a Kiwi in your honor lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/12/2016 9:19:00 PM
^WW^...this is a beautifully deadly write!!!...and the pic is deadly beautiful! :-) Nice one Sir!
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Date: 7/12/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Sir Walter...always nice to hear from you my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/12/2016 11:25:00 AM
The imagery is stunning in this write, well done! Rhyme and flow is outstanding!
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Date: 7/12/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you John my friend...god bless...^WW^

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