Discarded

lay crumbled on floor
her face alabaster white
red lips as though they had bled
     no life anymore
     beautiful blue eyes shut tight
     puppeteer had cut the thread.



original date jan 2016
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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 5:37 PM
this one has a great impact, Seren. Congrats. It's nice seeing you on a winner list. Don't see you much around any more!
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 1:25 PM
- So sad ... Seren - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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