Disarray

Is my room in such disarray 
That I'm not even seeing straight?
Are those dust bunnies wearing candy wrappers as hats?
Their building an army, I'm under attack!
They start to charge towards me with their toothpick swords
holding shields made of buttons and whips made of extension cords
They begin constructing a catapult made up of popsicle sticks and a wooden spoon
One by one the dust bunnies shoot across the room
Ducking every attempt to hit them with the broom
I bet I can suck those little buggers up with my trusty vacuum
Their little cries are covered up by my suction tool of death
I hope you bunnies enjoyed your last breath
I will keep my room clean I promise you
Now I am aware of what dust bunnies can do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/8/2019 10:32:00 PM
a simply grand decision!
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:44:00 AM
I love this! My last husky's name was Aster, we long joked about all of the aster bunnies ;), Congratulations for your win Rebecca! xomo
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:58:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Rebecca
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Date: 11/19/2019 4:25:00 PM
a great write for the contest.. good luck..
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