Disarray

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I’m just a poem in disarray
some words tossed on the page
A jumbled mess of things to say
that never act their age

Like stanzas baked in carrot stew
all mixed and mingled in
Nice woven thoughts on skies of blue
each evening that begin

Or lines without a golden crust
the frosting on the side
So read this if you think you must
or you can run and hide

There might be terms like diamond rings
for shining someone’s shoes
Some tiny fries called fingerlings
sold on the evening news

A basket I forgot to weave 
with verses on a thread
If that is something you believe
it’s something that I said

A phrase or two out on display
the perfect scenic view
Or just a poem in disarray
penned on this page for you



11/15/19
Disarray Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/27/2019 1:01:00 PM
This should have been one of the top three. Just saying...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Christine. I am thrilled you liked it. I was happy just to be on the list.
Date: 11/24/2019 11:46:00 AM
Wheee! This is so fun to read! Love it Chris, congratulations on your win! xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 8:28:00 AM
Wheee indeed...looks like I owe you a congrats on this contest. Yours topped them all and that is how I thought it would be.
Date: 11/24/2019 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so very much Greg
Date: 11/23/2019 9:39:00 PM
congratulations Chris....hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your kind thoughts
Date: 11/23/2019 6:11:00 PM
You ROCKED it, Chris. Way to go. Congratulations.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thanks so very much Andrea.
Date: 11/23/2019 4:39:00 PM
What a hoot! You had my mind in disarray I got the idea after reading a bit where this was going, a refreshing concept glad it was rewarded with a win. Sometimes you just havta have sum fun!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thanks John...Yep, we all need a break from the serious stuff every once in a while.
Date: 11/19/2019 5:53:00 PM
I see your disarray poem now , Chris...this is cute. I enjoyed it :) well done!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/20/2019 7:33:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/19/2019 9:50:00 AM
Awesome write Chris, glad I did not run and hide. : ) Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Cecilia. I am glad you liked this and happy you didn't run and hide as well. : )
Date: 11/18/2019 2:19:00 PM
Great poem. I love that you don't add huge vocabulary words that take away from the fun. Not that I am opposed to vocabulary but I don't always think it makes an individual sound smarter.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Christine, I don't think I could sound smart no matter how big the words were. : ) I appreciate your visit and kind comment.
Date: 11/17/2019 8:50:00 PM
What a mess!... Disarray/disarrangement/derangement --Great entry for the contest, Chris! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks GW. I appreciate your visit my friend.
Date: 11/16/2019 4:49:00 PM
Wow! Another excellent poem! This one has to place. Well done!...80)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Pat. We will see I guess.
Date: 11/15/2019 11:14:00 PM
A new take on the contest. Very good one. Bless you, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Gina. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 11/15/2019 7:58:00 PM
Excellently penned Chris, you never cease to amaze me with your talent! Best of luck in the contest!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania. That is such a nice thing to say
Date: 11/15/2019 5:09:00 PM
I love this Chris...it's totally all over the place and in disarray with those images, but it makes it shine just as any of your poems... your talent always shows in everything you write.... well crafted poem my friend, best wishes in the contest :) Enjoy your weekend and have a great night~ hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandy for your always encouraging and beautiful comments and thanks for reading this when you did...I forgot to enter it in the contest. Your comment reminded me of that. I appreciate you my friend.
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