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I FOUND THIS LURKING IN MY FILE - THOUGHT I WOULD SHARE IT WITH YOU - IT WAS BASED ON THE FIRST POEM I WROTE WITH DARREN WATSON CALLED 'OUR FIRST MEETING ON THE ISLE OF MAN'

Fran said to her milkman one day Do you fancy a roll in the hay Much to his chagrin Fran asked 'is it in?' You’re not quite as big as folk say! 10th February 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 5:42:00 AM

Haha, oh those images. Eyes wide shut now, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:20:00 AM

Ha ha James - I miss Darren so so much hope one day we get back in contact again:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/19/2015 9:34:00 AM

That is funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 9:38:00 AM

Darren was my on line writing partner until he got sick last year - this was written some time after our first poem together called 'our fist meeting on the Isle of man' - Darren and I have never met lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Darkland Poetry

Date: 2/12/2015 9:36:00 PM

OMG! I think this is the funniest limerick that I've read on the site. Too funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 4:37:00 AM

Pure fiction write about my lovely writing partner - if you read 'our first meeting on the Isle of man poem you will understand it more:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/12/2015 7:16:00 AM

Perhaps in this case you need a hand! This is so funny Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 4:36:00 AM

Ha Ha ha I can see where you get your sense of humour from - your mum's is awesome lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/11/2015 9:29:00 PM

You have me laughing out loud, Jan! I was gone while you and Darren were stirring up the Soup. I think I was missing out! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 4:36:00 AM

Do read our Jadazzle united poems if you get the chance Rhonda- in all our poems probably only a handful of words ever got changed:-) HUgs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 2/11/2015 8:15:00 PM

So the flag would not fly!!! How terribly sad!!! Keep looking for a better pole. LOL Brilliant my dear Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 4:34:00 AM

Thanks Edith - purely a fun write my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2015 10:40:00 PM

like I said in the other one. Baaa Baaa Baaad girl. hahahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 3:08:00 AM

Oh my bleating heart lol - glad you like this one my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/10/2015 6:56:00 PM

ha! hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 7:00:00 PM

For some reason I thought you would like this Ilene lol :-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/10/2015 6:04:00 PM

G'day Jan... I'm still chuckling Jan. Very good. Regards - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/10/2015 5:52:00 PM

LOL! Ain't you a good limerick gal, Jan my friend...I almost choked on my breakfast while reading this! Someone should think of a contest for limericks with same topic, bet this one'll be a shoo in. A 7. More guffaws from the land of thousand isles...Kim :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 5:58:00 PM

I love writing limericks Kim - there have been limerick contests in the past - I have put a link to my favourite - make sure you put your cuppa down before you read it lol:-) Hugs jan xx Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/bawdy_limerick_ii_577806

Arlene Smith

Date: 2/10/2015 3:46:00 PM

This made me laugh out loud!!!!... Is there were a bawdy contest this one would win, hands down!!.. And, I think I knew this guy once upon a time! Lol..... ;-)))) Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 3:57:00 PM

Arlene although we have never met Darren and I had the most amazing friendship until he sadly became ill - not only did we write together with barely a word changed in 30 poems with Jadazzle United but our mails flew like Concorde - and the humour never stopped - he is my poetry soup soul mate and I miss him oh so much:-( When I have any news I will let you know:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2015 2:22:00 PM

Naughty Ninja...but very witty and enjoyable:) Would love to see what his reply would be! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 2:26:00 PM

If you read my recent poem 'the poet who broke my heart' you will find a line from a cheeky mail from Darren:-) Love and hugs to all Naughty but nice Ninja :-) xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/10/2015 11:46:00 AM

Ninja La Sol Nails Jan Lo //A La Jinn Sol A All Jinn So// Jan Las Loin// Alls An Join //All Sao Jinn A Jan Ills No //LOVE JAN (Edited)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 11:50:00 AM

lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/10/2015 11:43:00 AM

Ninja La Sol Nails Jan Lo A La Jinn Sol A All Jinn So Jan Las Loin Alls An Join All Sao Jinn A Jan Ills No LOVE JAN

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Rajat - I hope you liked the poem too lol - I think you are having fun with the anagram maker :-) hugs ninja xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/10/2015 11:41:00 AM

I am glad that you can find a smile. How is your Dad?

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 11:43:00 AM

he is at peace with the world and in no pain - still smiling bless him:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/10/2015 8:47:00 AM

Hi my ninja lass, i see you are a bit happier than i left you last evening. I am glad. It amazes me that it has taken a week and some for me to write a romantic poem, yet in 5 lines you can eclipse me. Jan Allison you make me smile!!! all my love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 11:21:00 AM

There is no time frame to write poetry Shane - it takes time to collaborate - This was written sometime last year - I found it in my archive poetry folder and it made me laugh so i thought I would post it:-) As I say I never ditch a poem simply file it away and maybe use some time in the future Hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/10/2015 8:10:00 AM

Oh you NAUGHTY girl! Can I get 'in' on this? Rest assured you will KNOW when it is and will suffer no 'Disappointment' as a result (Dream on fool) Ouch! You didn't have SLAP me did you? Funny-funny-FUNNY my friend...

Tim Ryerson
Date: 2/10/2015 8:46:00 AM

Prayers for Darren...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Tim Great offer lol - not sure my hubby or your wife would be so happy lol - in spite of what i write Darren and i have never met - sadly he has been ill for over 6 months now - would love to meet him one day - who knows but for now I hope and pray he returns to good health - that is my main priority - will send him this poem in my next letter - i know I sent in in an e mail last year I am in dire need of laughter at the moment and found this in my archive file - couldn't resist posting it - you may find my poem i posted yesterday quite fun too:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/10/2015 7:42:00 AM

Good to see you in a better mood! Very funny. Made me smile! Hugs, dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios - lovely to see your smiling face too - i need to have humour in my life to take away some of the pain i am in:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/10/2015 7:04:00 AM

HAHAHA oh that made me smile this morning. Hugs xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 7:13:00 AM

I wrote it sometime last year Cas and found it in a file today - must send it on to Darren in my next letter - i am sure I will have sent it last year in one of our many e mails but it will make him smile again I am sure:-) Hugs jan xxx