Directions

conclusions drawn in crimson 
they're the hardest to erase
as is seeps from every pore
pooling on the tile like waste
I guess some would call it
a bitter aftertaste

it shrouds like a hooded cape
never quite fading away
it's there in all of my dreams
remaining here when I wake
gnawing like a critter
that is trying to satiate

is it all illusion?
a cruel magicians trick
a smoke and mirror side-show
the sleight of hand is quick
now you see it, then you don't 
one quick glimpse, before it goes
it's a double edged sword 
that I have fallen upon

it is the fickle hand of fate
and maybe it could be worse
the whole thing has me pondering
if I could have changed the course
hindsight is 20/20
you don't need glasses to see
it is hard to change directions
in the middle of what will be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Budd Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 5:22 PM
I absolutely love this. Especially that first verse and stanza. Grand write.
Hilliker Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:57 PM
I really like the last stanza. Sometimes, it's very hard to change directions. Thanks for sharing.
A  Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 11:02 AM
I WAS REAL DRAWN TO THIS ONE, AND THE LAST TWO LINES WERE SO TRUE, NICE,,Irma
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