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Pick-A-Title, Vol 56 Poetry Contest
#1 Direct Aim
Sponsor Edward Ibeh
3/29/26
Contest Winner Medal2nd Place

Direct Aim

The whispers in your ear,
  whimpering’s fit for dimming lights 
Only prayer, fasting, and sacrifice, shuts down
  the presumed unholy whisperer,
Slow speak, soft spoken
  For there are no magic leaves here
Only its moral decay
  For decades sharing spilled ink,
ill-favored mouth-print
  on a bleached blank canvas
Or a slight splash of color for takers
  made up of whinifestos, declarations 
 to sway the reader to their point of view
  Whilst, peeking inside invariably 
leads down a rabbit hole~
  As the attempts to share 
what seems like owned reflection,
  cast out onto readers
Promises designed to indoctrinate minds
  by literary whispers in the ear, 
direct aim to sell souls,
  I too, revolve around the feeling 
that a vast web of conspiracies 
  helmed by the devil himself
laid throughout pages to word
  in any attempt to sway hearts away 
and with no intention of quitting, 
  b u s i n e s s  is  g o o d 
When the enemy whispers in your ear,
  be quick to hear, the lure
Mentors fuel, in their minds they sanction,
  the method, the vision, the purpose
it remains to be seen 
  The influencer seems 
assured to continue 
  dispelling the brightness 
   …of the day
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Jones Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Clever well written! Congratulations on your win!
Anaya Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Tyvm, KJ!
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:51 PM
Great poem with great message, Anaya. I absolutely loved this. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Anaya Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 7:36 PM
Edward, I'm pleased! Pleased for the placement as well. I know there were so many with different points of views, a real challenge. April's blessings, my poet friend :)
Beaufort Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Anaya, we'd hope people would speak truthfully and with some humility. Hope you have a wonderful Easter and rest of year. Sending smiles!!
Anaya Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Unfortunately some can't change their attitude, and especially whispers to demean, influencers who commonly win over their victims, in the end it all unfolds. I've seen poets here, take their misery up to the very end! Your kindness spreads and warms hearts, you are very dear to us, Duke. Smiling~
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 1:25 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Two Great/Fun/Cute Pictures... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away............
Anaya Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 1:55 PM
This felt as an invested release, a good thing, as they say never suppress. The coming of Christ's Easter shall sway my thoughts profusely these very holy days. Lent blessings, Paula~
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