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Hello to all out there.' I was just visiting this write of mine from 'the olden days' well my olden days anyway.' L O L)) I wonder if you have picked the double meanings in it? ( world seen ) 'world scene'

'Dinosaur snuffs noisy' snuffles with nose..' Or dies noisy.. the crash as it falls over..'

Then the crash of eternal silence..' that is the heaviest component of all I would venture..'

P S there is also a bit of double meaning in the title..' I hope I have not bored you to much

Wishing you the best, Joe.'

Dinosaurs Misty Vale, Curtains

World scene..'

Dinosaur snuffs noisey,

crash!  eternal silence.



Copyright Joe Maverick 2010







(breaking news) Dinosaur writes , for SKATS contest.
back to extinction...i mean retirement for now..!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 9:19:00 PM

How are you? I have not seen any new post from you... are you okay now? How about the blues?? Well I'm sad,, i just lost my 3 pups.. called the dog pound and I have no luck,,, I keep wondering if God is mad at me.. I know it's a silly thought but oh! well....... Gonna go to bed soon,,good night..xox LINDA

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/25/2012 7:13:00 AM

"curtains" closed for that Dinosaur. A quirped and fun write, Joe! Love, Mikki

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/27/2011 1:15:00 PM

LOL not a haiku dear a sentence broken into 3 parts..HUGS

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2011 8:35:00 AM

Please do add to the blog haiku discussion! Light & Love

James Foulk

Date: 4/21/2011 11:57:00 AM

a very creative, very cute little Haiku. brought a smile. thank you for commenting on Sweet Erika.

James Fraser

Date: 2/26/2011 7:34:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in the contest Joe....:)

Date: 1/22/2011 12:10:00 PM

Clever poem. Enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest.Your presence at my work lightened up my life...Sara

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 7:15:00 PM

Joe, quit a statement on the destruction of these creatures. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Skat's contest. Agape, Moses

Royal Trevino

Date: 1/16/2011 7:10:00 AM

congrats! on your great win =(^.^)= Royal

Daver Austin

Date: 1/15/2011 9:31:00 AM

Always wondered about what did the dinosaurs in. Was it that snuff? Love, Old Dinosaur Dave

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/14/2011 7:01:00 PM

Congratatulations Joe. You won with a bang. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 4:53:00 PM

wow! You did enter the contest Joe, , Congratulations, on your well deserved haiku~enjoyed your awesome entry for the contest,.. p.d.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/14/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your entry being selected as a winner in the contest.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/14/2011 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT!-kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win in SKAT*'s contest "Dinosaurs". Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/14/2011 10:19:00 AM

Hello Joe, Wonderful and witty, congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:41:00 AM

This one is cute having the dinosaur snuff! Loved the ending too. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2011 6:04:00 AM

very entertaining and well done, joe! grea CHEERS on the win..:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/14/2011 5:04:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your super big win in the Dinosaur contest with this fabulous write and entry my friend... still luving the crash! line... enjoy with luv and happy weekend ...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 11:46:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful Haiku Joe. Harry

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/13/2011 1:06:00 PM

funny stuff!! Enjoyed reading your work!

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/13/2011 9:20:00 AM

Hello Joe, You made me smile with this one. Love it Thank you for your kind words As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2011 7:55:00 PM

That's a cute haiku, Joe, but your comment at the end made me laugh out loud. No retirement for you -- ever -- got it? Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2011 3:01:00 PM

Good one that reads like winners' circle work to me..Good luck..Your presence at my work awakened the extinct dinasaur in me..Sara

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