Dinosaur Dance

There were two dinos who loved the hop     
When they got started, they could not stop.
They bounced - flailed about,
Until both passed out,
and detained for affray by a cop.  

Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Big congrats to you,, Caryl! Love, Carolyn
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April 27, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning HM with this very funny creative write..gautami
Phookan Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning HM with this very funny creative write..gautami
Freeman Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Great job Caryl, congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses
Kopp Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Loved it!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:35 AM
Congrats Caryl on your HM in Robb's dino contest with this creative poetry excellence luv..enjoy your special honor too..
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations on your Dinosaur Dance placement Caryl. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Funny picture you paint. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Cute Limerick..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon...Reads like winning material..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 1:11 PM
This is a hoot, Caryl. I bet a child drew the cartoons for the contest. Who else could come up with something like that? You did a great job! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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April 25, 2011 at 12:43 PM
playful and well-crafted.. best winning luck in robb's contest, caryl! :) huggs, nette
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April 25, 2011 at 11:57 AM
This is a cute poem about the dinosaur cartoon Caryl. Good luck in the contest! Best to you, Diane
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