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Choose a title and 2 phrases Contest * November 13, 2023

                     Sponsored by Miranda Hawley

Dinner with friends while soft candlelight glows
We're dressed in formal attire, both genders
Goblets of wine while conversation flows,
what fond memories the moment renders.

Shared recollections from decades, gone by.
Good times of laughter and those when we cried.
Melancholy, it was a night spent without a dry eye,
happy tears and sad ones, we could not hide.

Round the damask draped table we remained.
Too quickly to us, it seemed the hours flew.
Reluctance to end the night was not feigned,
then, came the chimed hour to reckon adieu.

Hearth side, I sat... satisfied and alone.
Serene and reflective on friendships sown.

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Date: 12/2/2023 5:11:00 PM
Your picture goes perfectly with your poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/13/2023 9:09:00 AM
I enjoyed your "Dinnertime Stories" write/picture. Great Ending... Good Luck. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................
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Date: 11/13/2023 9:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. Let's hope we get invited to their next one.
Date: 11/13/2023 8:06:00 AM
Nothing beats sharing time with friends Lin, especially those you haven't seen for a while, so much to catch up on but never enough time. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 8:22:00 AM
You're so right, Tom and thanks for the contest wishes. We'll plan a dinner in Milton Creek when you're up and around again. We'll have it at Aces, of course. A feast for your return to good friends. Hugs, Tom.
Date: 11/13/2023 6:46:00 AM
Hi, Lin! Nice to meet you through reading this lovely poem! Obviously the words were chosen w/skill, by /meaning, music, definition, sound &/or rhyme. A very enjoyable read! Applause!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 8:20:00 AM
Hi Sally. We've both been around for some time. Thank you for your kind words about this poem. I'm grateful for your generous compliments.
Date: 11/13/2023 6:15:00 AM
Great sonnet lauding friendship. Lin. My "friend" memories are a little less refined. LOL Great so read you this morning.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 6:23:00 AM
It's not the setting, Danny. It's the friends. Thanks for commenting and good morning.
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