Dinnertime Stories - Revised

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Sonnet form utilizing the phrases:  lengthy but worthy away from the noise

Cast of shadows, courtesy of candle,
Light fading unfolds the same tale at dusk.
Soliloquized retellings of scandal,
Lengthy but worthy, as faults to unhusk.

Memories gone cold, my table setting,
Echoing attenuated laughter.
Plates piled high with the feasts of forgetting,
Still doleful hungers linger thereafter.

The flickering cloister of flames confer,
Enkindling solace in the solitude.
Tacit acceptance, no protest to stir,
Away from the noise, alone without brood.

Resigned, I dine on the remnants of day,
Umbral asylum, narrative decay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/2/2023 5:28:00 PM
Your poem is a little on the dark side, but congratulations on your win in my contest. Good job!
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Date: 12/4/2023 12:38:00 PM
Haha! Thanks for the placement, Miranda. I didn't think I had it in me to write another happy sonnet so I wanted to explore what a more somber tone might look like. The choices you gave for the title and phrases made this extra challenging in the best kind of way. Thank you for that :)
Date: 11/21/2023 2:55:00 PM
A very interesting sonnet! The unusual: Memories gone cold, my table setting& Plates piled high with the feasts of forgetting. Congratulations on first place.
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Date: 11/21/2023 12:58:00 PM
Very nicely penned Jaymee, Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/20/2023 12:34:00 PM
You are truly a gift to this site - wow!
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Date: 11/19/2023 7:29:00 PM
Hopefully this wasn't a regular occurrence and there were days when lighthearted banter without fault or scandal would be enjoyed. When memories were favorable, and the day had much to offer by way of jovial delight. Your sonnet held me captivated, waiting for a happy end, but you held steadfast to the mood you created. Bravo! Few could do what you achieved. Brilliant.
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