Dinnertime Drama

She couldn't loose the noose of his madman's grip As she clutched his last ~ potato chip

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Date: 11/1/2020 5:17:00 AM

Lol Nice to read your comedy piece Gershon...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2020 3:47:00 PM

A little laughter never hurts -- esp. right before the end. ~ Grim Reaper

Date: 9/10/2020 11:41:00 AM

And that's when the fight began...Ha! Another good one Gershon. laf

Date: 9/3/2020 9:05:00 AM

ha! unexpected and very funny, gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2020 5:37:00 PM

Yeah. A little surprise never hurts. Thanks, ilene! :) gw

Date: 9/2/2020 8:07:00 PM

Funny! A marriage saved is one where someone let’s go :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2020 5:36:00 PM

Ha, ha! Succinctly stated, Kim. Your comment's mini-epigram, truth be told. Thanks, Gershon

Date: 9/2/2020 7:08:00 PM

Talk about a 'food fight' Great humour love it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2020 5:35:00 PM

A little different from 'Animal House's' food fight, but it'll have to do for now. ~ Bluto Blutarski