Dinnertime Drama

She couldn't loose the noose
  of his madman's grip

As she clutched his last
  ~ potato chip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Tor Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Lol Nice to read your comedy piece Gershon...
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:47 PM
A little laughter never hurts -- esp. right before the end. ~ Grim Reaper
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:41 AM
And that's when the fight began...Ha! Another good one Gershon. laf
Bauer Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 9:05 AM
ha! unexpected and very funny, gershon!
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Yeah. A little surprise never hurts. Thanks, ilene! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 8:07 PM
Funny! A marriage saved is one where someone let’s go :)
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Ha, ha! Succinctly stated, Kim. Your comment's mini-epigram, truth be told. Thanks, Gershon
Horsman Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 7:08 PM
Talk about a 'food fight' Great humour love it.
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:35 PM
A little different from 'Animal House's' food fight, but it'll have to do for now. ~ Bluto Blutarski
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