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Dinner Time

Tigress dives all in No recreational swim Kittens yearn for food Entry in Primal Instinct contest

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/6/2010 5:38:00 PM

Kudos on your win, Joe. Nice going.

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/4/2010 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your top place Joe..well done...margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2010 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest "Primal Instinct" Joe. Love, Carol

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/4/2010 7:52:00 AM

Way to go, Joe! Good job here. RAY

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2010 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations Joe!! I missed this one the first time, so glad to see it as #1 poem!! Hooray for you!!! Well done! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 4:41:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your big 1st place win well deserved with this great Haiku.. savor the moment as the tigress hunts ...congrats my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2010 10:55:00 PM

well, you were one of the first ones in this contest and you came out first in the wins. Again, WAY to go, JOE! LUv, andrea

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2010 10:27:00 PM

Joe, congratulations in winning my Primal Instinct contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 10:08:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Joe. Love,Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2010 6:40:00 AM

Great approach to the picture...So many great ideas..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/30/2010 1:35:00 AM

OMG!! did I just say that those kittens are yummy??? I meant to say "hungry"! yiikes! Maybe it should be the other way around then--that turtle is one heck of a carnivore! Rofl!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/30/2010 1:33:00 AM

Very nice approach to the photo, Joe--have to agree that those kitties are yummy! You brought forth maternal instinct really well here, even the turtle is scared she might become prey ;) lol --thanks for your comments :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2010 10:44:00 PM

Very nice take on the photo, Joe. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn

John Beam

Date: 4/29/2010 10:05:00 PM

thanks lol little more serious this one hope you do well in contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2010 9:36:00 PM

Hey, way to go with this one. I see you are right on top of things. I have not even seen the picture yet!!! gosh, I better get over there. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 9:16:00 PM

Thankxxx Joe for your encouraging comment.. appreciate your faith in me as a poetess ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2010 8:29:00 PM

good luck in the contest you will do well,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:22:00 PM

Wish you all the best in the contest

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/29/2010 7:56:00 PM

I saw once a bottle with some alcoholic drink from Portugal with a snake in it. No way I was going to taste it :( Yuck! Great Haiku here, dear Joe. Good luck in the contest. Iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 7:53:00 PM

Great write and entry Joe and good luck in the new contest ... enjoyed your Haiku.. my entry is Survival Sequence.. just entered .. and I have company and I am on site here.. go figure? luv.. "Sweetheart"