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New place Sounds ace For lunch Or brunch Meets Dom And Tom Got new Menu Reveals Good deals Endorse Three course Deals viewed Choose food Veg soup Vile gloop Tastes off Can’t scoff I heave Food leave Await Mains plate Dead fly On pie There’s lice In rice Burnt fries No lies! Screams loud Draws crowd Staff look for cook He’s drunk As skunk My pud Not good On pear Dog hair Gets bill Big thrill It’s free For me For friend’s Full spends They'll pay Their way Won't tip Get’s gyp Waiter Hater! Return … we’ll spurn! 09/25/20

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2020 11:01:00 AM

Nothing like a footle to make my day. Congrats on your win Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 2:22:00 PM

thanks Caren i am so glad Brian liked this one:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 9/27/2020 2:45:00 PM

Another amazing footle tale, Jan. You are so good at these! Hopefully not a true story, haha! Congrats and hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 2:21:00 PM

Pure fiction thank goodness , i just can't resist this fun form:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/27/2020 9:15:00 AM

Jan congratulations my friend on your top win - a hilarious footle but certainly a place to avoid going to dine. Hope all good with your Mom. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 2:20:00 PM

thanks Jennifer, she is much better now thanks:-) hugs jan xx

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 9/27/2020 1:09:00 AM

another new place ? that place also made me wanna heave LoL Congratulations on your win Jan Allison :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:30:00 AM

thanks Paris-Maree:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/26/2020 10:22:00 PM

Footle in frolic fun. Big Congrats to win First Place. Love.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:29:00 AM

thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/26/2020 9:10:00 PM

As they say, you get what you pay for! This is quite an epic footle. Amazing, Jan! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:29:00 AM

was fun to write GW:-) hugs jan xx

Elaine George

Date: 9/26/2020 7:16:00 PM

Sounds like quite an outing! Many congrats on your top notch win dear Jan ~ Elaine

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:28:00 AM

thanks Elaine:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2020 5:40:00 PM

Clever poetry Jan, a joy to read...congrats..

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:28:00 AM

thanks Harry:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/26/2020 11:01:00 AM

This should make quite a number of people happy to be eating safe and sound in their own home! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 2:47:00 PM

to be honest Rico many people we know are still not going out here even though we are covid free, many say they are happier at home and have lost their confidence about going out, it is sad on many levels. we met friends last week we hugged and one said that's the first hug i've had since February (apart from ones from her hubby) so we hugged again!:-( hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/26/2020 10:32:00 AM

Lol! Loved it, Jan, don't tell me the place as I made a map of each place, my compliments on your win, Aloha! William

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 2:45:00 PM

lol thanks William:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2020 8:15:00 AM

- A big smile and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 2:44:00 PM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/26/2020 8:09:00 AM

Ewwww--my response to the food, not the footles! Amazing, accomplished piece, Jan! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 2:44:00 PM

lol thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/25/2020 11:16:00 PM

That's a fast food for the day. Laughed all the way. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 7:41:00 AM

thanks Victor it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/25/2020 10:30:00 PM

Yuck, fine flow of footles Jan. The horror stories you hear about eating out, not just cheap eateries either. (check out my lims if you get a minute, (If you eat out DON'T READ) see some of the comments. Back now, feel like a zombie, Hope you're well. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 7:38:00 AM

I loved your poems Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/25/2020 4:44:00 PM

This is a piece full of energy and fun. I enjoyed reading and hope you enjoyed the writing. God bless you with many more. Love and prayers, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2020 7:37:00 AM

thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Emilia James

Date: 9/25/2020 2:11:00 PM

I won't be going there then lol, enjoyed this Jan made me smile, another fun write, Emilia x : ) lice in rice yuck! lol

Jan Allison
Date: 9/25/2020 2:19:00 PM

I just couldnt stop once i started lol:-) yeah my fave is the lice in the rice and fly on pie lol:-) hugs Jan xx