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Dining's Out

New place
Sounds ace

For lunch
Or brunch

Meets Dom
And Tom  

Got new
Menu

Reveals
Good deals

Endorse
Three course

Deals viewed
Choose food

Veg soup
Vile gloop

Tastes off
Can’t scoff

I heave
Food leave

Await
Mains plate

Dead fly
On pie

There’s lice
In rice

Burnt fries
No lies!

Screams loud
Draws crowd

Staff look
for cook

He’s drunk
As skunk

My pud
Not good

On pear
Dog hair

Gets bill
Big thrill

It’s free
For me

For friend’s
Full spends

They'll pay
Their way

Won't tip
Get’s gyp

Waiter
Hater!

Return …
we’ll spurn!

09/25/20

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Caren Krutsinger September 28, 2020 at 11:01 AM Nothing like a footle to make my day. Congrats on your win Jan! Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 2:22 PM thanks Caren i am so glad Brian liked this one:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt September 27, 2020 at 2:45 PM Another amazing footle tale, Jan. You are so good at these! Hopefully not a true story, haha! Congrats and hugs ~ John Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 2:21 PM Pure fiction thank goodness , i just can't resist this fun form:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos September 27, 2020 at 9:15 AM Jan congratulations my friend on your top win - a hilarious footle but certainly a place to avoid going to dine. Hope all good with your Mom. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 2:20 PM thanks Jennifer, she is much better now thanks:-) hugs jan xx

Paris-Maree Boreham September 27, 2020 at 1:09 AM another new place ? that place also made me wanna heave LoL Congratulations on your win Jan Allison :) Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 5:30 AM thanks Paris-Maree:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta September 26, 2020 at 10:22 PM Footle in frolic fun. Big Congrats to win First Place. Love. Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 5:29 AM thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf September 26, 2020 at 9:10 PM As they say, you get what you pay for! This is quite an epic footle. Amazing, Jan! :) gw Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 5:29 AM was fun to write GW:-) hugs jan xx

Elaine George September 26, 2020 at 7:16 PM Sounds like quite an outing! Many congrats on your top notch win dear Jan ~ Elaine Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 5:28 AM thanks Elaine:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman September 26, 2020 at 5:40 PM Clever poetry Jan, a joy to read...congrats.. Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 5:28 AM thanks Harry:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta September 26, 2020 at 11:01 AM This should make quite a number of people happy to be eating safe and sound in their own home! Well done! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 2:47 PM to be honest Rico many people we know are still not going out here even though we are covid free, many say they are happier at home and have lost their confidence about going out, it is sad on many levels. we met friends last week we hugged and one said that's the first hug i've had since February (apart from ones from her hubby) so we hugged again!:-( hugs Jan xx

William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2020 at 10:32 AM Lol! Loved it, Jan, don't tell me the place as I made a map of each place, my compliments on your win, Aloha! William Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 2:45 PM lol thanks William:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2020 at 8:15 AM - A big smile and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 2:44 PM thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy September 26, 2020 at 8:09 AM Ewwww--my response to the food, not the footles! Amazing, accomplished piece, Jan! CONGRATS on your win. Janice Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 2:44 PM lol thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar September 25, 2020 at 11:16 PM That's a fast food for the day. Laughed all the way. ~~ Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 7:41 AM thanks Victor it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham September 25, 2020 at 10:30 PM Yuck, fine flow of footles Jan. The horror stories you hear about eating out, not just cheap eateries either. (check out my lims if you get a minute, (If you eat out DON'T READ) see some of the comments. Back now, feel like a zombie, Hope you're well. Tom Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 7:38 AM I loved your poems Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh September 25, 2020 at 4:44 PM This is a piece full of energy and fun. I enjoyed reading and hope you enjoyed the writing. God bless you with many more. Love and prayers, Gina Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 7:37 AM thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Emilia James September 25, 2020 at 2:11 PM I won't be going there then lol, enjoyed this Jan made me smile, another fun write, Emilia x : ) lice in rice yuck! lol Jan Allison September 25, 2020 at 2:19 PM I just couldnt stop once i started lol:-) yeah my fave is the lice in the rice and fly on pie lol:-) hugs Jan xx