Dining In the Everglades

Kind-hearted, loving and compassionate
Dane Ann would jump through hoops to please a friend
But by a treacherous quest she’s beset
In Everglades’ swamps she wants to descend

She seems to think she can take photographs
Of huge alligators and crocodiles
And though Dane Ann has many well-honed crafts
When I speak of the danger, she just smiles

On shore gators run 50 miles per hour
So two mature ladies won’t pose a threat
Their teeth so sharp, personalities dour 
One look at us their appetites would whet

Dear friend, I’ll take you where you want to go
Because I care very much – je t’adore
You want close-up shots; the fear in me grows
As gators draw near, will you shut the car door?



*Je t’adore is French for “I love you.”
Dedicated to Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen who thinks she can outrun the gators :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/13/2012 2:25:00 PM
LOL, scary write indeed, my friend...
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Debbie Guzzi's "Fear" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2012 6:56:00 PM
Wonderful write, Carolyn. Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest........................... S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:29:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a superb win for this dynamite write of sheer bravery on both parts.. wisdom always wins out though luv.. nicely penned..
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Date: 2/11/2012 6:58:00 PM
Congrats, Carolyn! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations Please forgive the cut and paste congratuations I must do today it does not diminsh the feeling behind the congratulations or the quality of the work presented. mum not well need to go out xx
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:26:00 PM
superb tribute for dane; anything with sharp fangs scares me!... well done; congrsta! :) huggs
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:50:00 PM
hehheh great poem and tribute to Dane Ann AND the gators! Hmmm you know... I think I woud rather photo the gators than ...let's say.... jump out of a plane! : ( :O :Q :D
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Date: 2/9/2012 12:16:00 PM
This gives me the shivers and Dane Ann is a brave soul to live with those gators. I live in an area where we have no real threat from any animal . This is wonderful because you can take a walk and not have to look over your shoulder for anything or step anywhere and not worry that you may step on something wrong. Love it here for that fact alone. A nice dedication to Dane-ann. love phyl
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:08:00 AM
They might be beautiful shot but I couldn't do it... They're too mean looking to me... Your a true friend.
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Date: 2/9/2012 1:57:00 AM
She will do all for hers friend - take you where you want to go,lovely friend.Well done Carolyn. - love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/8/2012 7:40:00 PM
If this is true, she should go for it! I live in South Florida. In the Glades, there are guided tours by foot, bicycle, amphibious vehicles and airboat. You don't have to put yourself in danger to get some great shots. I've done the airboat a couple times. My advice, do not come in summer. The humidity is wicked! Great poem for your friend, Carolyn.
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:34:00 PM
What an interesting write my friend! Alligators and Crocodiles, I'm scared of both of them! I don't blame you for your fear, not at all! And Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen wants to take pictures of them? I couldn't do it! Your poem explains all this quite nicely! I think you have a great write here! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:14:00 PM
I just flew back in form Tampa this Monday night... I surprised my Godfather for his 80th birhtday with the whole family!!! No gators seen this time but will be back there in June for a visit and some Golf and will keep my eyes open for sure.... I have missed you and just read your blog about your comp... stay in touch love... luv Michael
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:40:00 PM
LOL I love to photograph alligators! I'll post some of my gator photos from the last photo trip...too long ago in 2002. I love this poem, Carolyn. I know you are terrified of gators. By the way...I don't want to get in the water...just beside the water! lol ...just beside it!!! Thanks for writing the poem. NO FEAR!!! https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=2721767079212&set=a.2721754998910.2122937.1108135406&type=3&theater You might be able to see one there!
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:29:00 PM
an airboat may help.
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:28:00 PM
I actually did in florida!!!hahahhaaha. and so did my babysitter pulling my oldest son in the wagon. Miss Orlando ran so fast, she said. It crawled over the moat fence was in my front yard sunning, was near the glades for y2k at the first annual for the homeless visual there in Naples. God bless you both, a true friend you are, with love, Cindy
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