Ding Go In Style

We buried our dog, Ding
With her favorite things,
Like our couch, plus our bed
And pillows for our head.

Our carpet she muddled
With dirt and pee puddles,
The window she stared through
To bark at who knows who.

The hedge she sniffed and chewed,
All of our leather shoes,
My truck’s passenger seat,
But not the children’s feet.

Two of our best chickens
She chased like the dickens,
Seven of my wife’s hats,
But not much more than that.

We paid a contractor
Who with a large tractor,
Dug a humongous hole
For our dear doggy’s soul.

And it did our heart good
Though we now sleep on wood;
Without a comforter,
Since we did comfort her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A wonderful write. "Love It" True dog lovers will do anything for their dog... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Wood Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:13 PM
I enjoyed this by David. I have dogs and I love them a lot but they can definitely try ones patience. Sorry for your loss but I'm pleased to see the poem recognized.
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 6:36 PM
O, for doggone sakes, David! lol... This world has, indeed, gone to the dogs! :) gw
Slaughter Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Well, David, I'd say you gave old Ding a great send-off. I'm sure she's happy in her doggie paradise...with all your stuff, of course.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:35 AM
I absolutely adore this poem. Fave’n :) xomo
Fisher Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Rolland Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:55 PM
such sad poem, to hear about bad news, send you some recomfort, my friend, dogs are fairhful friends to care about yann
Romios Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:17 PM
11/8~ 8pm PST. I am thrilled to be the first to reply to your warm, touching poem! I know your expertise in writing by now.so can’t tell if it’s fiction or not. Of course,I realize all that stuff could not be buried. But~ you obviously knew what dogs love. You are great at charming the Reader. I hope I learn from you. Five- Star Review plus a Fave, David Pangie xx
Fisher Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:35 AM
So many thanks, and yes a fictional tale. Of course fiction is based on real life to some degree, but when I write about nonfiction, that's usually when I'm playing with fire; third-degree.
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