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Ding Dong Dither - For Contest

Campanologist forgets to let go the rope His face rings a bell

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Sam Pepper

Date: 9/21/2016 11:29:00 AM

Doesn't make any sense its just u trying to be classy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/11/2015 3:43:00 PM

Hi Bill #1 this is not a haiku. Here help on trying to write a haiku do not be discoraged it took me 2 years to write a bad haiku! # 2 even a good haiku can not compare in my estimation to the longer forms. I do not care at all for short forms, but if it had been a haiku you would have still gotten into the top 10. http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist -

Sam Pepper
Date: 9/21/2016 11:29:00 AM

how tf u spend 2 years writing a poem

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/11/2015 3:43:00 PM

The word Campanologist would not be used in a haiku. haiku are meant to be sensory and "as simple as porridge". I hope this helps. Light & Love