Ding Dong

DING DONG happy chappy his day birthday naughty sortie boke toy smashed joy spoilt fun smacked bum enough said now bed partying starting ding dong rave on

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/7/2017 9:45:00 AM

Interesting footles here. Spoilt fun, smacked bum...was my favorite. Never found footles easy to write. Thanks for your visit to my Never Shame a Woman. Much appreciated.

Mick Talbot
Date: 11/7/2017 10:55:00 AM

Hi Eileen, Haha, they are fun, but yes finding the next 2 syllables is the tricky bit. As for your wonderful poem, I just had to add my pennyworth, I see and hear it nigh on every day, I'm going to leave at that, for if I was to carry on I'd start ranting. Moving on, again thanks for stopping by, I will be following you, hope you find it in your heart to reciprocate

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/7/2017 9:00:00 AM

:-) Fine footl'n! ~ j

Mick Talbot
Date: 11/7/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thanks, John, appreciated!

Silent One

Date: 11/7/2017 7:46:00 AM

Great footles Mick..

Mick Talbot
Date: 11/7/2017 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One, appreciated!