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Diner Off Exit 66

How many come, get gassed, fed, watered, relieved, and leave the waitresses, ladies of the all-night indifferent to day— a dinner omelet, a breakfast cocktail, where every meal is any meal, and bitter coffee continually flows from the counter, where America’s finest ketchup stands proud behind the sugar, forever used up, refilled, replaced, changing hands like the guest check turned and overturned, or the saucer-covered quarters it took an hour to earn? I leave whatever I can on this smooth, reflecting counter, impressed by the depression of a stop along the way, where only those who serve will stay. February 1, 2017 for "Travel Light" Contest

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Date: 2/2/2017 5:03:00 PM
Hi Rita. This is a great poem. Gentle, hard hitting, pleasant, truthful and kind at the same time. I can learn from this and I will. Well written, Kai
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/2/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you! I like the theme you picked.
Date: 2/2/2017 3:34:00 PM
Great take on the subject - a diner through time rather than a snapshot. Congratulations! :-)
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/2/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 2/2/2017 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Rita!! Well done!!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/2/2017 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 2/2/2017 6:42:00 AM
What a great take on the subject :) This is so incredibly well written! Nice to discover your poetry because you too entered the contest. Congratulations!
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/2/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, Darren!

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