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Dimmer

Bitterness grays, as the years dwindle down 
Time chips away and memories fade

Time,...slips away, nibbling at grief
and years, without mercy, is also a thief
My vision of you is harder to see, 
And try as I might,...it burns all the leaves
Your beautiful face, the fire of you,
Only flashes of amber.......there is only a hue
I can't view the picture as clearly I did
I can't turn it on like a light in my head
It burns, lowly, dimly...just a flicker, instead

I once knew your voice and the warmth of your smile
Now there's barely a whisper in the dark of the night
I try to reach out, and grab it somehow
But it cools into embers, and memory fails

Like a photograph lost, where it doesn't belong
Fading each day,  in the sun for too long
Fading and losing the bright flame I knew
I ponder the embers that have died in the flame
And I wonder, and worry, it comes like a pain
......,will I know you, will you recognize me
    if somewhere beyond, we meet once again?





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July 24, 2015 at 3:19 PM
CARRIE, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
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July 24, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Great write, Carrie, love that last stanza. Congratulations, Viv x
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July 24, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie! Quite an emotive write!
Parker Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on your win I really liked the change in form it created movement of speed in your poem,as emotions do when they rush out
Nance Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Awesome writing, thank you for entering my contest, it is a pleasure seeing you place ;)
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July 23, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Thank you very much Casarah ! It was an honor to place in your contest!! Thank YOU !!
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 3:02 PM
such a heartfelt touching write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 26, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Carrie.Rgds Brian
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July 25, 2009 at 7:01 PM
Touching write. When my mother died I believed it was the worst that could happen until I went to a viewing for my neighbor's young son. Congrats Carrie on your very heartfelt write being featured. Vince
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July 25, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on having this very poignant poem featured. Love Heidie
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July 24, 2009 at 6:58 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you! adeleke
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July 22, 2009 at 6:59 PM
Who could ever hope to beat you in a contest when you write such heartfelt, beautiful poetry! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy~
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July 21, 2009 at 10:18 PM
Congrats on your featured poem. I enjoyed the read. Ernilando
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July 19, 2009 at 5:53 PM
wonderfully done ... congrats on the feature :)
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July 19, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Carrie~Wow what a sad but sweet story that looks like a winner to me! Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! So well done I almost cried! Love Laura :)
Doggett Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 3:56 PM
What a beautiful expressive thought. Grieving is such sweet sorrow. Congratulations on your selected feature. Bill
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July 19, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week Carrie>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved write being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
Dey Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 9:27 AM
What a beautiful and sad poem Carrie.I know exactly how thatfeels. Well done for expressing it so well. Alison.
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