Dimly Breaks

Dimly breaks   the sun
light fights    the hooded gray
   spiders die    birds escape
   conquered leaves   drop dead.

Fear abounds
   for Victor   Fall 
   be on a bounty-seeking spree
stripping   strong trees 
   to naked   bare.

While   cowardly new   growth
   she hides   she hides   
   as dimly
dimly breaks   the sun.
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April 19, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Well crafted and well designed Nice wording
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