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(This haiku isn't in the ancient hokku form). Indecisive mind divided feelings state of no response ......................................... Coming and going spell out your real heart the miss confusion ......................................... Wandering brain from house to house where is thy root? ........................................ Like end of the road walking away legs heart still in love.

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Date: 2/15/2011 3:10:00 PM
This is just like i used to travel...awesome image capture, charles!
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Date: 2/14/2011 11:15:00 AM
very nice haiku...did you mean to link them on purpose. It's nice Julie
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:26:00 PM
beautiful multiple haiku with great images, Charles
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:52:00 PM
They may not be the "ancient form " but they are wonderful, many amazing lines to ponder, now in answer to your questions, I am fine, I lost my pet cat of 13 years in January and it shattered my heart, but I am doing well now, working way too much in my opinion, enjoying writing and reading poetry and how are you doing?
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:16:00 PM
Those last two really struck me, Charles, Great images in them! write on!!
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading each of these...I especially like next to the last one about the wandering brain..Your presence at my work this afternoon was like a ray of sunlight on a cloudy cold rainy winter's day...Sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:13:00 PM
Luv the wandering brain and where is thy root? Charles.. I just wrote a comment on one of the blogs for John Freeman about roots today .. great minds think alike luv..haha.. awesome expression in this Haiku form.. appreciate your thoughts .. thankxx for your sweet comments always welcome luv..
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:11:00 PM
Nice string of Haiku's Charley. love mom
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Date: 2/13/2011 11:34:00 AM
soup mail mom
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:58:00 AM
soft smile...your left brain is refusing to let your right brain have a "chance!!!" BIG hugs, thanks so much for reading my long poem [I have many long ones which you'd like which go mostly unread, try The Master's House or When Madness Rides on Moonlight] Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:54:00 AM
Hope you have entered this one in Charles Henderson's "String Haiku" contest, son. When someone leaves us in this state, we have no choice but to walk away, but the love in our hearts often lingers on. Nicely expressed! Love, "mum"
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:51:00 AM
Akin to the old cliche, "A rolling stone gathers no moss", Charles. Great Haiku in that it should help us think. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:46:00 AM
Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Karen
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