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my short shadow says grow tall or wait for sunset the cranes stand upright 09 July 2021

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Date: 7/10/2021 5:40:00 AM
Another strong Haiku. The contrast in height is strongly etched in each sharp line. Cheers, Brian
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/9/2021 8:41:00 PM
Imagery rich and interesting. I enjoyed it!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 1:31:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/9/2021 2:48:00 PM
I like how you put that last line for the ending!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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