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Dilemma

my short shadow says grow tall or wait for sunset the cranes stand upright 09 July 2021

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/10/2021 5:40:00 AM

Another strong Haiku. The contrast in height is strongly etched in each sharp line. Cheers, Brian

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 9:45:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/9/2021 8:41:00 PM

Imagery rich and interesting. I enjoyed it!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 1:31:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2021 2:48:00 PM

I like how you put that last line for the ending!!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:35:00 PM

Thank you very much.