Digital Elegy - Hiku 36 -

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Written: August 11, 2025, For contest by Brian Strand __________________________ * * * * * * n o o s p h e r e * * * * * * | f | l | i | c | k | e | r | s /|\ \|/ *** \|/ slack-jaw a~w~e at f~a~d~i~n~g s~t~a~r~s—\|/ *** *** e s c i n z e z l l i e of s noosphere flickers slack-jaw awe at fading stars— sizzle of silence

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2025 3:33:00 AM

Awesome haiku dear Sir. Best of luck.

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2025 12:30:00 AM

The very idea of noosphere itself is complex. The mysteries of the universe make one slack jawed. Wonderfully crafted. All the Best.

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/12/2025 4:53:00 PM

delicious and creative, enjoyed a lot, thanks sotto poet

John Fleming

Date: 8/12/2025 1:52:00 PM

Nicely contrived, S.P . :) john

Paige Hind

Date: 8/12/2025 12:45:00 PM

Gorgeous! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/11/2025 4:40:00 PM

outstanding in every respect! The 'sizzle of silence' is brilliant and creative! What an enjoyable read for me. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Texas hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2025 1:59:00 PM

Your "Digital Elegy - Hiku 36 -" is a fun read and creative write/shape. You are getting really good at this. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a blessed/fun day writing away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2025 10:06:00 AM

- Agree with , Victor ... good luck in the contest, Las :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/11/2025 8:39:00 AM

You are getting quite professional at these.