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I wonder, why would someone dig in graveyards in the night If they knew that I was here, they would get such a fright A spade digs in the darkness, I can hear but cannot see Digging in the darkness doesn’t make much sense to me Could it be that there’s illicit actions going on Could it be that someone’s got a body they want gone Still they dig, they’re going deep, I hear the soil shift I’m in no doubt they’re getting rid of someone that they’ve stiffed I keep my presence secret as they dig into the ground Then all at once I hear a slightly hollow wooden sound They’ve come upon a coffin that they didn’t know was there A final resting place but they proceed without a care They should just drop the body in that's needing to be hid I hold my breath when one of them decides to lift the lid The moonlight makes me blink and as my bony grin grins wide I say, ‘Try another cubicle… this one’s occupied.’ 14 October 2021 For Contest: Something Spooky Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 10/25/2021 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful written Terry and terrifying! Congratulations on your win.
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/25/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Sam. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 10/25/2021 12:10:00 AM
Great writing. Deep story. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj
Date: 10/24/2021 4:12:00 PM
Such a spooky, entertaining story poem, Terry! Congrats on your first place win! Well done! :)
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Laura. There were some wicked entries, yours included, so a first is a very welcome thumbs-up. Terry
Date: 10/24/2021 2:03:00 PM
Terry, congratulations on your first place win with this gem, I was captivated with your poem!
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:48:00 PM
Thanks Tania, so glad you enjoyed. Chuffed with a first place. Terry
Date: 10/24/2021 12:00:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/24/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 10/24/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute~~story/write. Yes, this cubicle is occupied. Have a blessed autumn day...............
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Date: 10/24/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. My output has been sporadic of late, so I’m chuffed with this thumbs up. Terry
Date: 10/17/2021 6:40:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! Hilarious, Terry. You have 'occupied' my brain with another rib-tickler. Thanks! ~ gw
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:38:00 PM
As I told Belle, I really wanted to hold the punchline til the last line, but had to hint a little in the last but one. Pleased you enjoyed, Gershon. Terry
Date: 10/14/2021 12:04:00 PM
Spooked, shocking! When Barnabas Collins coffin was open, the gravedigger became a slave.
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Date: 10/14/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Not familiar with Barnabas Collins, must look it up. Terry
Date: 10/13/2021 5:06:00 PM
You sure dug deep with this spooky tale, the punch lines had me giggling Terry, thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 10/13/2021 5:00:00 PM
A very spooky poem Terry, it keeps the reader in scary suspense right up to the last two lines, a fantastic twist that’s hilarious… Belle
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Date: 10/14/2021 11:48:00 AM
Tried hard to get a one line punchline but it wouldn’t play ball. Glad you enjoyed, Belle. Terry

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