Dig

Broken,beaten,blind and lost
All but a spark of hope left to keep warm
But dig and claw on bruised muscles, on broken limbs
Until the light day fills your sight
Left blinded no more
Dig
Until the soft fresh air blows the spark to a flame and ignites your will
Dig
Until the ground beneath is solid enough to stand
Walk,until the pain is mastered and stumbling ceases.
And you can say:
This will not be my grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 16, 2026 at 7:10 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 20, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Are you the daughter of Dorothy and Norman?
Palmer Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:04 PM
love the determination message in this poem,great write Gillian
Christian-Bowling Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Wow this poem is so powerful !!!!:-o-Love Ettie
A  Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Gillian, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
Adderton Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Excellent, very moving.
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April 24, 2013 at 7:52 AM
An intense write indeed!! Enjoyed reading..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 4:13 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, you write very well. - (Giving and receiving) Visit other poems and give your comment - and you'll get back. - Continue with your beautiful poems. - Have fun with words and thoughts. - Good luck. - See you again. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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April 23, 2013 at 10:51 PM
Gillian"Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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April 23, 2013 at 10:42 PM
Gillian, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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April 23, 2013 at 10:25 PM
I loved this, it was well written. great job!
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