Different Ways

The valley, layered thick in fog and haze,
With cloudy, billowed whites and blanket grays,
Eager awaits the sunlight these spring days.

Well before noon, the sun, most of these days,
Gently pulls back the cover on the haze.
Spring’s vibrant color shines forth through the grays.

The years, in stealth, have added to the grays;
And more, it seems like when I walk these days,
I spend my time in muddled fog and haze.

My haze and grays, spring days go different ways.

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Technically, I guess this is a Monorhyme Tritina.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hankins Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Love it, Jeff. I especially loved "the sun...gently pulls back the cover on the haze." Your imagery is striking. Marvelous!
Kyser Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 10:59 AM
I wish it would pull back the haze that's thwarting Bat and Gat: Unwanted Picnic Guest, lol.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Love the imagery~filled with the "Different Ways" that Spring makes her entrance. :)Paulette
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