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Different Stages of Undress

Can always guarantee myself success Just write about different stages of undress The female form's a delight My naughty passions ignite But in public these feelings I must suppress © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 12/23/2015 10:30:00 AM

It's Christmas time so don't be late... So pass that dear old cookie plate... They ought to be yummy at any rate... Even if later we may have to lose some weight... And No, strip poker is not the way to get back to that slimmer state... Tho it might be fun to try, you old retrobate... Sorry! It rhymed and I just couldn't help myself. Merry Christmas!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 7:59:00 AM

I vote for strip poker... but that's just naughty old me!!! xox

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/22/2015 12:25:00 AM

Keep on writing about them, Jack, otherwise you'll be accused of gross negligee-ence.... Merry Christmas and a happy new beer, regards, Viv

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/22/2015 9:26:00 AM

CLEVER my friend!!! LOL Merry Christmas and a Happy New Beer to you too!!! LOL Jack

Tim Smith

Date: 12/21/2015 6:11:00 PM

Jack got the idea from playing strip poker...forgetting he wasn't the only joker...lost the first hand...on the floor his pants did land...after a few minutes we found out he was a smoker

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/22/2015 9:27:00 AM

LOL!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 12/21/2015 8:07:00 AM

hmmmmm bet you're not alone Jack....Merry Christmas...Happy New Year..Hope you will always bring us great cheer!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/21/2015 8:11:00 AM

Hey sweet friend!!! You always manage to raise my spirits Miss Judy! And a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year back to you, dear Miss Konos! Love and warm hugs, Jacko xxxx