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The days so few and far and in-between, Loneliness I never knew has captured my soul, The sweet smell of her hair I remember so well, But even with her, I was never quite whole. My nights too are lonely and blue, Memories fading into the distance again, How do I abide when all my youth I have spent, In taverns and bars with occasional friends. Nobody warned me I'd be sitting alone, I guess I always figured, life just goes on, So here I sit contemplating my fate, Wondering all the time where did I go wrong. Interpreting meanings that make no sense, Floundering my time in various places, Never seeing the light that shines so bright, When I look into the mirror I see different faces. There is a spark but it will not ignite, There are steps but they have no spring, Lost in the ocean just one of mankind, Like a prayer that cannot sing. /|\

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Date: 11/18/2016 8:00:00 AM
What the heck is a Vogon? :) That last line is money! Sadly intriguing. Captcha is GOO... ;)
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White Wolf
Date: 11/18/2016 5:43:00 PM
Vogon is the third-worst poetry in the universe, Haha /|\
Date: 11/12/2016 10:32:00 AM
A sad and beautiful journey down the lonesome road to nowhere, Rick. My Vogon heart bleeds for you. Wonderful poem really. Great write, my Aussie friend. Love and peace to you.
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White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 5:52:00 PM
Don't tell me that this arduous journey is pointless and leads to nowhere! Hahaha. I know, it's the journey that counts, right! Thanks, RW. Hope all is well over there my friend /|\
Date: 11/12/2016 9:38:00 AM
You captured it here, Rick. That loneliness we all slip into at points in our lives is universal -- we contemplate, regret. Things that will change may never seem to. My grandmother was a widow for 40 years, & when I was ten, I asked her, "Mama, do you ever get lonely?" She said, "Wesley, there are worse things in life than being alone!" Not to down play your words -- I just wanted to say, "Keep your head up!" Remember: wei wu wei -- Wesley C
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White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 5:46:00 PM
loneliness is a small price to pay for independence. It also creates character I guess in many ways. your grandmother sounds like a wise woman. Thanks, Wesley /|\
Date: 11/11/2016 12:57:00 PM
Excellent introspection Rick. Many have been there. The spark will come again.
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White Wolf
Date: 11/11/2016 4:44:00 PM
Thanks for understanding Tim, and thanks, mate /|\
Date: 11/11/2016 10:31:00 AM
ohh, how poignant is this gem, rick... enjoyed!..huggs
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White Wolf
Date: 11/11/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette /|\
Date: 11/11/2016 6:51:00 AM
Rick, this was great, out of control good. Though sad, the poem reflects what many feel it seems. I am not familiar with this style but I like it. Hopefully this is fiction, (with the exception of the hanging out at the bar part) :) Good job my friend, keep them coming.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2016 8:02:00 AM
What's the 1st worst?
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White Wolf
Date: 11/11/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, Chris, the lower the woes, the higher the glows, that's how it goes with bipolar, Haha, and the form Vogon is the 3rd worst poetry in the universe. I was feeling a tad silly, as usual. /|\
Date: 11/11/2016 3:29:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, well written Rick - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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White Wolf
Date: 11/11/2016 3:38:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, and you too! /|\
Date: 11/10/2016 9:46:00 PM
Wonderful written, Rick, you're talent out shines in this peace :-) Hugs Eve
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White Wolf
Date: 11/10/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment Eve /|\
Date: 11/10/2016 9:20:00 PM
Your poem is striking in its depth of inner reflection. I greatly enjoyed it.
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White Wolf
Date: 11/10/2016 9:24:00 PM
Thanks, Christy. Glad you liked it /|\

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