Jan Allison Poet Chastushka

Diet Dilemma

I must stop eating Snickers
I can’t fit in my knickers
Have less food on my plate
Won’t moan about my weight

08~23~14
Written for Chastuska Me Contest
Sponsored by Dr Ram Mehta
Rhyme scheme AABB
~awarded 5th place ~

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Olusegun Arowolo September 17, 2014 at 10:22 PM Lovely piece,Jan...Congrats on your well deserved win. Jan Allison September 24, 2014 at 4:04 PM Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

John Lawless September 16, 2014 at 9:51 PM snicker....snicker....very droll chastushka. Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 3:51 AM Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos September 16, 2014 at 3:51 PM Congratulations, Jan on a very hilarious write! I enjoyed this piece - better than the Snickers! Congratulations on your wonderful win!Pandita Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 3:53 PM LOL Thanks Pandita for your lovely comment and your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2014 at 3:45 PM so cute, Jan, especially the first two lines. How did I ever miss this one? and CONGRATS. Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 3:48 PM You know me Andrea I love to try and amuse if I can:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2014 at 2:19 PM Jan, I'm going to print this one and paste it on my refrigerator door. Well said! Congratulations, Carolyn Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 2:55 PM LOL Carolyn it is purely a fictitious write I lost nearly 6 kilos in 3 months and am trying to put a bit back on:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Roy Jerden September 16, 2014 at 11:32 AM Back for congrats! Cheers, Roy Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thanks Roy _ wrote a limerick the other day called 'big billy' you may like it I think;-) hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans September 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM Dropping back with my congratulations for this funny Chastushka. Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 10:35 AM Thanks Brenda as ever for your support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith September 16, 2014 at 7:56 AM Congrats Jan.an excellent win....hugs Tim Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 10:35 AM Thanks as ever for your support and friendship Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus September 16, 2014 at 7:28 AM Congrats on your win, Jan....I'll buy you a Snicker bar when I next see you:) hugs // paul Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 7:42 AM I will hold you to that Paul!!!..I will expect a hug and a Snickers when we meet in October:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 16, 2014 at 6:31 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the support, Jan Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 7:40 AM Many thanks Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans August 28, 2014 at 9:29 AM Nicely done Jan. Good luck. Jan Allison August 28, 2014 at 9:34 AM Thanks for dropping by Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Roy Jerden August 25, 2014 at 4:44 PM Good one, Jan! BTY, I would capitalize Snickers as a brand name. Also there may be a typo - Dilema is spelled Dilemma, I think. Cheers, Roy Jan Allison August 25, 2014 at 4:46 PM Thanks Roy I will correct - it didnt show up my 'smell chequer' can't be working lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2014 at 5:54 AM Great one..So much truth within your lines..Aren't those snickers good though..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Jan Allison August 25, 2014 at 7:28 AM They are delicious! Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2014 at 2:17 PM :)))) - love it,Jan ..... so funny ...... eat your snickers ..... it's Saturday !!! - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 2:26 PM LOL Anne Lise - it's is just for fun am going to be good and keep the snickers for another day as I have just had a turkish delight mmmmm :-)Hugs Jan xxx

Kyle Kriticos August 23, 2014 at 10:09 AM Hahaha this was very well written. And koodos to you for writing about this :) ps I too am a victim of rhe stickers factory Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 11:00 AM I am like most women I love Chocolate LOl this was just for fun for a contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian August 23, 2014 at 9:32 AM :) Love snickers....Also BOUNTY! ;) Yes...eating those make one bountiful! ;) Oh dear....Rolly Polly me salutes you! Hugs.....and good luck on contest. Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 9:39 AM Oh Plain chocolate Bounty i could eat one now - mmmmm SUCH a shame hubby and son dont eat them or snickers LOL. Hugs as ever jan xxx

Tim Smith August 23, 2014 at 8:17 AM Are you stealing my snickers? lol....hugs Tim Tim Smith August 23, 2014 at 8:34 AM If I had 4 on Tuesday..I would have had none on Wednesday :)....luckily I have a good metabolism and burn more calories than I take in :) Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 8:24 AM Nooo Tim I would never steal anything even chocolate! I purchased a packet of 4 on Tuesday - hubby and son dont like them (shame tee hee) so I still have 3 left - I am happy to share:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Paul Callus August 23, 2014 at 8:06 AM This must be quite a dilemma for you Jan! It's not an easy choice. But I heard say that dark chocolate might solve the problem. Nothing to lose by giving it a try:) gl in contest. // paul Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 8:10 AM It is just a fun poem Paul believe me it doesn't apply to me ... Since dad's illness I have actually lost almost a stone in weight so a few snickers wont hurt me:-) Hugs Jan xxx