Diet

I was advised to change my diet My bowels were causing a riot For too many plums Play havoc on bums Making it hard to keep things quiet.

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Date: 9/5/2023 11:15:00 AM

Hmmm… are you local… it’s been extremely windy around here of late. Congrats on your win, John. Terry

John Read
Date: 9/6/2023 5:50:00 AM

If London is local, then yes Terry, sorry if I disturbed you.

Date: 9/5/2023 6:24:00 AM

Haha John. Like it! Congratulations! :)

John Read
Date: 9/6/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Linda.

Date: 9/4/2023 2:12:00 AM

Very funny; congratulations

John Read
Date: 9/4/2023 4:18:00 AM

Cheers Terry second spot is not too bad.

Date: 9/3/2023 4:46:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest brother John, well done… Sis Belle

John Read
Date: 9/4/2023 4:20:00 AM

Thank you sister Beryl, 2nd place is not to bad, I'm gradually getting there, can't believe where your one came, it was far better than my one.

Date: 9/3/2023 4:35:00 PM

John, a cute one with great rhymes, congratulations on your winning placement!

John Read
Date: 9/4/2023 4:21:00 AM

Thank you Tania well happy with my placement, hopefully will make top spot one day.

Date: 9/1/2023 4:24:00 PM

Great humor, John!

John Read
Date: 9/2/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, we could do with a little more humor in this world of ours.

Date: 8/29/2023 12:00:00 PM

Your "Diet" is a creative/fun write. I enjoyed reading this Limerick. I so did this contest. Have a blessed day writing away.............

John Read
Date: 9/2/2023 9:54:00 AM

Thank you Paula good luck in the contest.

Date: 8/26/2023 8:46:00 AM

Good one brother John, cut down on those plums from now on… Sis Belle

John Read
Date: 8/26/2023 8:55:00 AM

Hi sister Beryl, I only wrote it for the limerick fruit contest, not having much luck in the other contest though.