Notes About The Poem

From the World Post: “Die Badende” or “The Bather,” is a giant, styrofoam-and-steel sculpture showing a woman’s head and knees if she were soaking in a bathtub.Created by artist Oliver Voss, the 13-foot-high, 98-foot-long sculpture will be on display in Hamburg’s Binnenalster Lake for the next 10 days. (Aug. 3, 2011)

Lady of the lake: The giant 'mermaid' will be on show at the Alster Lake in Hamburg for the next ten days

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Die Badende

One August day, to Hamburg’s great surprise,
I showed up in their Inner Alster Lake.
I peered at passersby with big blue eyes;
two knees poking up caused a double-take!
Nearby the promenade they’d had me placed -
at least two tons of gorgeous womanhood!
Alas! It was not many days I graced
the area although I wish I could
have stayed, for I enjoyed it when they came
in boats right to my face to see this “nude!”
I loved to pose for pictures and felt no shame.
Some said I was an eyesore though. How rude!
I was removed, and then they all could see
a pretty face was all there was to me!

Sept. 1, 2017 for the Artwork Contest of Lewis Raynes
(other than the sculpture’s knees and face, there is no other part of this floating statue to be seen)
Please see notes and pictures in “About Poem” above
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B. Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Great poem Andrea! When I looked at the top picture of the knees quickly it looked like two people mooning in the water lol.
Daniel Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Interesting artwork and a great poem too, Andrea:)
Sivey Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 5:06 AM
Wow Andrea, you have written an awesome write for the contest, such a wonderful Personification! I have 2 hrs to use the computer now each day. This weekend I'll use it to go on the Soup, then I'll have to use them for school starting on Monday! And I'll have to have Emma get on to read and write for me...she is awesome, I love her dearly! Your poem is so delightful to read, what a masterful piece I must say! I really enjoyed reading your fabulous poem here this morning! Great Work my friend!!
Stars Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:56 PM
oh my god look at her face ... once again you open this readers mind to coolness ... awesome share poet ...
May Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Very interesting Andrea...Nicely penned...hugs
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Absolutely awesome Andrea and i am stunned we have chose a similar theme for poems today but they are so totally different:-) am adding this to my faves its fabulous:-) hugs jan xx
Anish Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Sounds like you had an interesting trip! You can see a poem of mien on the Voices Israel Newsletter for September. I like being read in the Holy Land. I have not traveled as much as I would like but I have been to Jerusalem! Keep it up Matthew Anish
Raven Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Hi Andrea, your words give life to an lifeless form, thoughts that one could well believe it thinking if it could. As always, you write your piece so well, excellent work as always. The content keeps the attention from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX. This one swims its way into my faves.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:31 PM
glad you liked it so much, my friend.
Parker Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 3:24 PM
she is a rather bold exhibitionist...is that picture a selfie?ha ha...good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Yeah, I have lost a few pounds since 2011. hahaha
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 1:13 PM
It is a fun read--quite an unusual piece of art. You did a great job of depicting the scene. Well written, Andrea!
Cozart Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 12:50 PM
Your poem is charming.
Vaso Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Great write, last line so good, and you made me smile!!! :)
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Wow amazing Andrea...it's so cool...I've seen similar in parks but never water.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:34 PM
The thing that surprised me was seeing it OUT of water at one website. It's ONLY the face and knees and nothing more!! I cannot find if it is destroyed now. I searched and searched and could not find where it might be.
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:44 AM
This sculpture is crazy good. Last line of your poem kinda says it all. Best wishes Andrea...
Warrior Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:55 AM
I love art like this...great depiction, Andrea...god bless and best of luck...^WW^
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:34 PM
Thanks, I love stuff that is a bit different from the norm.
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