Did You Notice the Swollen Bud

.
                No one knows when it appeared.
                        I noticed it last week—
                  a small rust colored swelling
                   at the tip of a thin branch.

                Today it wears a crown of snow,
                     an inch of frozen crystals
                          arrived overnight,
                 glorified in its elevated position.

                           It made me stop.
                   Stop to admire spring's bud
                       in the middle of winter
                            on a frozen day.

                   The sidewalk was cleared
                  by the lady and her machine
                         without disturbing
                           what lay above.

            The sparrows stay close to the feeders
                           on days like this,
              leaving the bud in its dormant state
                                  alone.

                       Perhaps a gust of wind
                        will remove its crown
                         before a warm spell.

                           But the bud rests
                           like a wise athlete,
                  waiting for the right moment
                                to release
                         sequestered energy.

                     Waiting without complaint
                        or need of assistance
                         for equinox’s signal
                         and spring’s arrival.

                               Giving hope
                          to those who notice.

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Date: 2/15/2019 8:09:00 PM
Many blooms are visible in my world. Yes, "Giving hope to those who notice" I completely agree. My heart is smiling. :) You paint such vivid images with your words. Simply beautiful indeed. ~ Brandy
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Gerald Greene
Date: 2/16/2019 1:36:00 PM
we wait with nature, and spring will arrive. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 2/15/2019 1:57:00 PM
Hello Gerald Greene, so nice to meet you. I must say, that you have created a beautifully written poem. It won't be long before Spring returns. Have a nice day my friend.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 2/15/2019 2:12:00 PM
Yes, spring is only one month or less away for most. I'm pleased you like the poem.
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