Diamonds of Inspiration

Those eyes of yours
Holding a bunch of blue sky 
Have been inspiring me lifelong
To seek rhyme and song
In turbulence  
A Buddha like balance

Then you, the sceptic 
Always asking 
'What is your view?'
Almost like Socrates
Never readily conforming to 
Any set thesis
Would open a sky
Asking why this
Why not that
To discover a new door to stand at
Thus you wanted to groom us:
'Cogito ergo sum'
I think, therefore I am
Relaxing my diaphragm
And now in the twilight I look at
My too many windows to look out
For a new sprout
I thank you there
Among the twinkling stars

And you young girl
How soft suave but yet straight 
Is your speech
While we screech at a little conflict
Raising ugly forms
Ignoring norms of civilization
You are always low but firm
Polite but powerful
I try to be like you
In my communications
In interrelations
A grandfather trying to emulate a granddaughter 
Life is a great assorter

And there you 
The oranges in the tree
The beauty spree
The life and lyre free
Have inspired me
To stay happy
Even in despondency

Then you
The beggar in the street
A lesson for survival
Never say yes to defeat
You have to first sleep and eat
Then towards other vitals 

You the whore
Drifting from shore to shore
Embracing sort of death
For the sake of life
Tiny shines of strife


Where ever you look at life
With a childlike interrogation
With a touch of admiration
Will come across
In a session 
Diamonds of inspiration
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3/1/2017 : Contest: Who has inspired you most in your life
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri-Carroll
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:40:00 PM
Probir a big CONGRATULATION on potd with this great write .
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Date: 1/5/2017 11:03:00 PM
Most welcome, BW ... Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 8:17:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your beautiful poem being presented as Poem Of The Day! A well-deserved honor! Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2017 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra ...
Date: 1/5/2017 6:50:00 PM
Indeed, 'diamonds of inspiration' I appreciate most, the assorted lines- it's gives a clearer picture
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:33:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 3:49:00 PM
yes, a POTD for this extraordinary write, probir!..huggs
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:34:00 PM
I feel your joy ... thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 12:52:00 PM
Hi Probhir congrats on POTD. Nicely done
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend ...
Date: 1/5/2017 9:38:00 AM
congrats on poem of the day friend stephen
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thank you, Stephen ...
Date: 1/5/2017 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD for this fine write, Probir:)
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel ...
Date: 1/5/2017 7:13:00 AM
So beautiful... Congratulation it so belong to be potd :)
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 6:51:00 AM
Wonderful, marvelous Inspirational Congratulations probir,
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful, Probir. Congrats on POTD and hood luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 6:25:00 AM
Wonderful Probir, a great contribution of thought, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 1/5/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie ... In fact you all have contributed ... especially those whose poems I read and enrich my thought ... of course including yours ...
Date: 1/5/2017 5:03:00 AM
Diamonds of Inspirations in people and even in nature. A warning to the wayward one "and you the...drifting...embracing death"! All this is a true expression of life and lifestyles. Congrats on your POTD. Enjoy your day. Rainbow.
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Date: 1/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
Thank you ... let us , from our low, look up at the rainbow ...
Date: 1/5/2017 4:43:00 AM
Really good poem
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Date: 1/5/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/5/2017 4:25:00 AM
congratulations on POD. Lovely poem
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Date: 1/5/2017 5:33:00 AM
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Date: 1/5/2017 3:10:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Probir - A pleasure to congratulate you with p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2017 5:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne ... Love:)
Date: 1/4/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thinking more about "Life is a great assorter" - it's what evolution does, it's what pain does, sends us one way, groups us, selects us, separates us, has us meet others similar to us.
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Date: 1/4/2017 7:12:00 PM
Right, Doug ... It is life and how we observe life, these two inspire us to grow intellectually ... at least I feel so ...
Date: 1/4/2017 12:36:00 PM
DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL, WITH THE NAKEDNESS OF TRUTH AND REALITY OF LIFE! Super 7 for this one my friend!
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Date: 1/4/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/4/2017 5:38:00 AM
"Je pense donc je suis" comme Rennet Descartes a dit, mon ami Probir! Impressive! Loved it! A seven!
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:31:00 AM
Thanks, dear friend ...
Date: 1/3/2017 10:19:00 PM
7. Probir, a delicious poem, packed with things I love. So many, but here are two: "Would open a sky" and "Life is a great assorter" Hahahhahaaa you have made me wealthy. : )
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Dough ...
Date: 1/3/2017 12:43:00 PM
This is a poem I admire, I give it a 7. A childlike interrogartion and curiosity indeed....
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, precisely this you need to think, learn, think again and keep yourself happy ... nothing is more thrilling and enlightening ... and obviously inspiring ...
Date: 1/3/2017 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem again... Loved it... A big 7...
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:10:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
So beautiful, Probir! I love your use of colors. I can see and taste...surely those diamonds sparkle! 7
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:14:00 AM
Thank you ... poems are as the readers perceive it ... to someone this poem is unsettling ... to you it plays with colors ...
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