Len Gasun Poet Quatrain

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A poem inspired by the contest theme. thank u.

Diamonds In Your Eyes

You titillate my senses 
Every time you stare at me,
 I feel losing my balances
All gems in your eyes I see.

You possess tantalizing eyes,
Like diamonds in the sky;
Don’t attempt to look at me thrice,
You’re in love…you can’t deny.

I’m completely captivated 
You know my only weakness
In your wooing you succeeded,
You’re getting my final “yes”.

As we hold each other’s hand,
Happily gliding on snow;
Kissing me all around,
Diamond remnants-all aglow.



Dec. 31, 2013  5.15pm
by Leonora G.

Fourth Place
Contest: A Diamond Remnants
Judged: 1/14/14
Sponsor: Poet Gail Angel Doyle

I will be closing the year 2013 with a romantic poem;))). Happy New Year 2014 to all! Wishing you all the best of HEALTH,  LOVE, PEACE, HAPPINESS AND SUCCESS!

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Donna Jones January 17, 2014 at 8:54 PM Wow congratulations dear friend leonora on this fine win..hope all is well with you in this new year..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2014 at 12:03 PM many congrats leo xx

Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2014 at 9:07 AM What a great way to close the year, congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 14, 2014 at 9:43 PM Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Leo

Olusegun Arowolo January 14, 2014 at 4:48 PM Wonderful and beautiful piece,Leonora...Great write....Congrats on your win,great friend...

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2014 at 3:07 PM - Congratulations Leonora, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2014 at 12:35 AM Sure hope this one wins, Leonora. Just stopped by here again to say hi,

Donna Jones January 3, 2014 at 6:43 PM You are diamonds in everyone's eyes....sweet big sparkley ones...a wonderful winning poem for sure Leonora....happy new year.:-)

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2014 at 10:43 PM Leonora, you are a diamond in my eye. Thank you so so much for being part of my company on new years eve... That was awesome, Maybe that's why, my heart was overwhelmed when we did the countdown.... Sending much love to you and your poetry this year. I do love the passion in this poem... You are a delightful twinkle in our eyes... Always and forever... Linda as your BFF..... and SIS Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:03 AM Likewise my dearest sis & BFF. Thank you so much for everything! Happy New Year again and advance happy Three Kings! Biggest hugs and kisses!

Nette Onclaud January 2, 2014 at 12:18 AM nothing like a topping of romance to end the year, sweet lorie.. such a mellow, charning tone sparkling like worded gems ,, hope you had a great 20i4.. grabe pa rin ang paputok dito... wishing you love and joy..still on a break? huggs! Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:04 AM Thank you so much my dearest friend Nette! Wishing you the best. Biggest hugs!

Roger Horsch January 1, 2014 at 9:27 AM A wonderful poem Leonora, But I think you are the diamonds in everyone else's eyes. Not the other way around. I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry.....Hugs....Roger Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:05 AM ;)))))Thank you so much my dear friend Roger. Advance Happy Three Kings!

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2014 at 12:05 AM This is so romantic, Dearie!! Thanks for your new year's message. I luv you!!! Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:06 AM Thank you so much my dearest friend Andrea. I love you too. Biggest hugs!

Skat A December 31, 2013 at 1:15 PM Lovely quatrain, Leonora good luck. Wishing you a wonderful New Year...... SKAT Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thank you so much my dearest sis and friend Skat! Good luck and best wishes to you and your love ones as well. Biggest hugs!

Sara Kendrick December 31, 2013 at 9:42 AM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Reads like a winner for the contest..Way to go..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend Sara! Biggest hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta December 31, 2013 at 6:45 AM Very romantic take on the diamond's remnants, Leo Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thank you so much for stopping by my dear friend Dr. Ram. Biggest hugs!

Russell Sivey December 31, 2013 at 6:38 AM Wow, this is a very creative and ingenious of a write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this incredible piece Leonora! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!! I want to wish you a very Happy New Year my friend! Have an awesome new year...you are close to the new year right now, enjoy it! Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 7:36 AM Thank you so much for the very encouraging and inspiring comments my dear friend Russell. Happy, happy New Year again to you! Big hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2013 at 5:40 AM - Hey, Leonora thanks for all the beautiful and sensitive poem from you - and thanks for all the smiles you sent to me, I very much appreciate your warmth and your friendship! - Just a few words to you the last day of the year 2013 - Looking forward to a nice friendship and many new poems from you in the new year 2014! - I wish you and your family all the best for the new year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun January 3, 2014 at 7:38 AM You're welcome my dear friend Anne Lise. Thank you so much for everything as well. Happy, Happy New Year again! Biggest hugs!