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Diamonds

Some people put on a show; they out and out lie. You know real friends will tell you the truth, nicely. Like rainbows in the sky, friends are a welcome sight; like rainbows, friends mix sunshine with the rain.
rhinestones glossy, sparkly pretending, daring, charming sequins, showoffs; friends, jewels supporting, cautioning, inviting solid, honest diamonds
written as a diabun (as a haibun is to haiku, so a diabun is to diamante) March 13, 2017 Contest: Frank Herrera's - An Expression of Love

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Date: 3/17/2017 6:45:00 PM
Great depiction of a true friend Reason! Good luck in the contest~Che :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:04:00 AM
Great creativity RAP, congratulations...
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Date: 3/14/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for the read and the nice remark. Try a diabun sometime.

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