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Diamond In the Rough

When, darkness settles in the heart. Not the darkness that makes you blind. And you can't see straight. But the darkness that makes you feel that love is not a feeling to be shared of shown as passion of comfort. But to be used as a four letter word to control or convince a person to do whatever you want them to do. To use a four letter word to deceive a heart who doesn't knows the different between love and lust. When that heart is broken, the heart suffers. A piece of that person dies. That means the love you have in your heart is no more. But you understand and still can't accept the pain that love is gone. Only then you see what true love really is. The comfort you have just from laying in someone's arms. The passion you share with just a simple touch of the lips that makes the heart explode with desire. The trust which is harder than any steal on earth that could never be broken by words other people say. But darkness overtakes the heart. The heart refuses to love again. But no heart can go without love for so long. When you, meet someone that's pure at heart. I mean when that heart has never been love but used. The two hearts comfort each other. The heart that is pure becomes tender and full of joy. For long the shell begins to crack and a light shines through. The shell is like a rock, because the heart has never felt love so it was hard. The first taste of love breaks the rock and the passion comes out. The darkness that covers the broken heart starts to fade. The heart doesn’t want to love but the treasure is great. It can feel what's beyond the light, the comfort, friendship, passion, and trust. Everything the heart needed a diamond in the rough. Author: Jaspery Jones Jr. J Two Date: January 4, 2006

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Date: 6/17/2009 5:23:00 PM
"be yawned" beyond?..excellent analysis! Light & Love
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