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Diamond Dust Turned Rock

I owe you, Cadbury iris of mine eyes
From age to age you watched me aged
Grace reminds, I'd see naught sans you gracing me
Yet; two more eyes I possess, there's two of spirituality.
Yes, I've grown from fire and ice, hurricanes, and sad groans
They say, one day I just simmered; seemed more settled
I who rose like dulcet scented rose in spring time
When time served stews with parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme.
My whole life I spent waiting; feeling trapped inside dark hole
See, I lived near the Sea, but could not behold its quiet beauty
At seventeen, one knight sought my hands, I smelled freedom that night
As my spirit  soared; but he was dismissed... my heart felt sore with pain.
Dear to me was he. "You have eyes like a female deer." he said
But mine eyes now sparkle like a rock... black girls also rock!

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Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton
Contest Name: "Wordplay Extravaganza"
Date: 4/14/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Excellent write and wordplay, Iris! When young we often fail to see the beauty around us, mostly because our mind is taken up with other 'distractions'. Enjoyed the 'eyes' references in the final lines:) Regards // paul
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Thanks, Paul. I am learning to filter distractions.
Leiser Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Iris :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Laura. Have a lovely day.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:06 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Iris..
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank U dear one.
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Very beautiful write and love the photo of my fav. lady, Iris, congratulations on your win :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thanks Eve. Somewhat surprise what became of it.
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Beautifully written Iris congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank U dear Jan. A bit surprise what became of it.
George   Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Deep and profound! An excellent entry for the contest, Iris.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Happy Easter weekend, and thanks for visiting with your warmth.
Turner Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Sometimes just identifying the problem is all one needs! Be blessed!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:24 PM
U 2.
Turner Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Very eloquent look into the past, the lessons learned and the resolution. Brilliant. Really nice Iris.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Thank U Daniel. We'll c what become of it.
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