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Diamond Dust Devil Unplugged

She blows in like a whirlwind And glimmers like the sea Her eyes shine like midnight stars And cold as winter's breeze She'll promise you the pleasures That you have never known You will shower her with gold and jewels And she'll tease you till you groan She will take from your friends Convince you, they're not friends at all Steal you from your wife and kids Then stand and make you crawl Now when she's had her way with you And your heart's consumed with strife She'll take from you the one thing left The precious breathe of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/4/2014 8:37:00 PM
Wow once again a very nice read and write.
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Date: 5/30/2014 12:09:00 PM
Feeling swept away by your words....Clever write. Congrats, new buddy. :)
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:46:00 PM
EPIC WRITE, EPIC WIN.... CONGRATS... LUV ~LINDA
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:11:00 PM
Whoosh that first line one great line!!! I like the midnight stars as well and how your take to the contest is..:)!!! It's refreshing first 4lines then you change the mood to intrigue then you end it with a bang great!! congratulations! :)
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations. Luckily I've never met her.
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Date: 5/29/2014 3:58:00 AM
Well done Jerry...congrats on the top honor
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Date: 5/29/2014 12:03:00 AM
Very nice Jerry. Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:10:00 PM
Perfect for the contest n here is the top win ! Big congrats Jerry !
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/28/2014 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, you are very kind, Dr. Upma
Date: 5/28/2014 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, jerry
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/28/2014 10:20:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram
Date: 5/28/2014 9:33:00 PM
congrats on your win!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/28/2014 9:34:00 PM
Ha---If I could only write music, Thanks Debbie
Date: 5/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
Ahhh HA! A siren truly. Congrad's on your win [sounds like a good country song!] Light & Love
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:08:00 PM
Jerry, thank you for the number one placement in my contest. Now I see it. LOL. Congrats..... SKAT
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/28/2014 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Skat
Date: 5/21/2014 11:58:00 PM
This poem was not in my contest, may I ask you why. Jerry, I feel the need to read this poem again.. Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/22/2014 5:02:00 AM
Sorry Skat, I wrote it for your contest and thought I had entered it, Oh well, as we say in France, Oops !
Date: 4/25/2014 7:39:00 PM
Oh yea... Good write.... Love it......lots of smiles...... Gina
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/27/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Gina, I really never heard of a DIAMOND dust devil and still not sure what it is.
Date: 4/9/2014 10:23:00 AM
Fortunately I was not married at the time.
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Date: 4/7/2014 2:31:00 PM
I like this very much thank you for sharing... Smile and hugs... Gina
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/9/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Gina, I'm waiting for your next poem
Date: 4/5/2014 5:38:00 PM
Many have surcumbed to this dark angel.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/9/2014 9:52:00 AM
Richard, are you speaking from experience ?lol

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