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Billions, of years, Diamonds forming, Deep within the volcanic earth, Savagely smoldering gasses and vapor, Violently erupting kimberlite rock, Blasting high temperatures, Surfacing this precious stone, That makes men risk their lives, With blood! Pain! Death! Murder, Sometimes under the earth, Sometimes deep under water, Toil, and sweat, in poor conditions, To becoming a multi-billion dollar market, Fetching beauty, glamor, and sophistication, People have become so attracted to this stone, Becoming a statement of luxury, The diamond that sparkles like no other gem, It would cause people to steal, For a piece of its action, This volcanic rock has become, The Holy Grail of life. So that women can still say, Diamonds are a girl’s best friend, Unknowingly for the cost, To human life. 06/08/2016 For contest with Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 8/16/2016 7:20:00 AM
Congrats Wendy, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/17/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy xxxxxx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/17/2016 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy xxxxxx
Date: 8/13/2016 1:44:00 PM
Came back to say...Congrats!!! Wendy...god bless...^WW^
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thank you winged xx
Date: 8/13/2016 9:43:00 AM
Great read Wendy, and nice win.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Ronald xx
Date: 8/13/2016 1:58:00 AM
Excellent take on the theme, Wendy!!!! Congrats for your win
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Date: 8/12/2016 6:57:00 PM
Looks like you did more than a little research. One day, when we begin to mine asteroids and planets, diamonds (and other precious gems and metals) may become as common (and inexpensive) as salt and pepper. Congrats! ;-)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Tom xxx
Date: 8/12/2016 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations Wendy on the placement of the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Nayda x
Date: 8/12/2016 4:46:00 PM
Dropping back with congrats Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Jan great subject x
Date: 8/12/2016 3:55:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/13/2016 4:07:00 AM
Thank you Alexis xxx
Date: 8/10/2016 3:54:00 PM
Hi Wendy, You've done your research for this well written poem. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/11/2016 2:56:00 AM
Thank you Alesis x
Date: 8/9/2016 4:46:00 PM
You've researched this so well Wendy - showing the beauty of the diamond against the darker side for those who risk their lives finding them ...who good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/9/2016 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Jan xxx
Date: 8/7/2016 11:49:00 AM
A very descriptive write Wendy...best of luck in contest...god bless...^WW^
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/7/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Winged xxx
Date: 8/7/2016 6:58:00 AM
You surely know your subject Wendy, this is truly amazing poetry..just love this...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/7/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, did a little research before I wrote it, cheers xxx
Date: 8/7/2016 5:55:00 AM
Beautifully described the Diamond process....BTW I hate diamonds... Good luck in the contest....
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/7/2016 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Supraja xxxx
Date: 8/6/2016 12:18:00 PM
- A diamond with the correct symmetry (finish), Wendy - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/6/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you sunshine xx

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