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Dialogue of Souls


Best of friends, for countless years,
we had the best of times.
Now as my eyes are filled with tears,
your soul to Heaven climbs.
The path we take, not always clear,
I feel so lost without you here.
Your last words, prophetic now,
“I’ll be home soon”- you knew somehow.
You left me here, I’m so alone,
but I dreamed Heaven had a phone.
We talked all night, you fell asleep,
I held the line to hear you breathe…  

 

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Date: 9/6/2016 5:10:00 AM
Congrats Cole, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 9/5/2016 11:56:00 PM
So much emotions in the lines...Congrats on your win. :) Sunita
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 9/5/2016 8:17:00 PM
This poem is deeply touching...... so well deserving on being high on the winner's list . What an melancholy, but beautiful poem this is. Well done!!
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 9/5/2016 7:51:00 PM
Poignant piece, Cole, and those last two lines are absolute belters. Congratulations on your placement. Regards, Viv
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 9/5/2016 7:39:00 PM
Cole, beautifully written, mine was similar, but this was way better :)-luloo
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:16:00 PM
This poem. Cole your words haunt me in a beautiful way. I've ready a lot of poems. have a lot of favorite poets. Frost, Neruda, Yeats, Eliot, Cummings, Keats, and Collins to name some of them. Each with poems I like. But this poem is my favorite of all time. Thank you for that. I have lost people in my life, a lot of people. Losing my grandfather some twenty years ago. I once dreamt that he called our house after he passed, just to talk to me. This poem will forever remind me of him.
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:49:00 PM
Glad you like this poem Jesse. It comes from the heart. You might also like my poem "The Stairway to Heaven". Check it out...
Date: 1/25/2014 1:36:00 PM
This poem is both beautiful and achingly sad. Congratulations Cole! Jen
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Date: 1/26/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Jen...
Date: 1/25/2014 8:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful and moving winning poem, Cole !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/24/2014 2:11:00 PM
heavenly... big cheers on your win, cole!
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Cole Banner
Date: 1/24/2014 4:46:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/24/2014 12:12:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:47:00 PM
Thank you! Glad you enjoy my work...
Date: 1/23/2014 10:38:00 PM
Subtle and heartfelt ! Congrats on great win Cole !
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:47:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/23/2014 8:01:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on loneliness and congrats on the fine win, Cole
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:47:00 PM
Thank you as always!
Date: 10/30/2013 6:24:00 AM
Very sweet, tender and heartfelt poem, Cole; enjoyed this piece; kudos :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.