Dialogue of Place

Should I whisper words
that hang on memory’s peaks,
cumulous across my forehead?

A world of words - connected
like tides to the moon.

Words that mingle and rise,
as mist from a valley 
or, dwell in half forgotten dreams;
endless as ocean waves,
or vistas of flowering fields.

Beautiful words
that tell me of my place.

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 8:53 PM
charming imagery ~
Hicks Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Poetry is everywhere ... you just have the eyes to see it, the mind to reflect on it, and the heart to cherish it; and I think you have all three of these qualities. Beautiful nature analogies, Suz. Your place is wherever your pen chooses to spill it's ink :)
Delaney Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thanks Tim: .....for your thoughtful comments, always. You also have the soul of a dreamer and a poet - never change. Hugs, SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Dear Suz, I am back to encourage and inspire you to write another lovey poem like this one! I miss you. Love, Connie
Delaney Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Dear Connie: I have been very remiss in replies and participation lately. John is not well and not only that we have made a huge decision to downsize and move. Getting the house straight for listing is a huge under taking. Loved, always, SuZ
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 8:42 AM
And i salute the effect of your words of poetry! They issued forth in great imagery eh! Kudos. So nice to read u again.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 3:08 AM
I really love this beautiful poem Suz. Your imagery is breathtaking! Hugs, Connie Going into my fav's. 7
Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Geez where have you been gal it's been too long since you touched base with me. How's life? Light & Love
Sirak Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Amazing! It is great when you post a new poem. I love your images of words as living things, mingling, rising, dwelling...
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