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Dialogue of Autumn

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She speaks of trees in morning mist A promise of leaves all color kissed. Discourse in shades of russet tones Her loss of emerald leaves bemoans Her cadence heard in whispering leaves With cooling winds she summer grieves In mellow tones her course made known She squalls till all her leaves have blown And with her branches bare to sky Bids to summer a fond goodbye.

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Kenneth R. Merrill

Date: 7/9/2019 9:55:00 PM

Rhyming couplets, cool! A rare gem in a world of free-verse, which for some reason I find challenging. I love your writing, which I can see, as opposed to an otherwise prosaic read. Kudos, Suzanne ;-) -Ken

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/9/2019 10:08:00 PM

Thanks Ken: I do like to try lots of different forms. I generally choose a form depending on the subject matter. I will send you a soupmail on what i learned regarding form. Not enough space here, Best, SuZ

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2018 8:08:00 AM

Suzanne, your imagery and beautiful way with words is blowing me away today, friend. I am so glad that I have discovered your poetry today! Happy New Year my friend.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2018 10:57:00 AM

Dear Friend Karen: Thanks for making my day with your wonderful comments. I promise to visit you soon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2018 5:52:00 PM

Did yours not win either. Just here again to say how much I love your fall poem.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/2/2018 6:28:00 PM

Soupmail

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 11:41:00 AM

Hi Suzanne, I do love Autumn and Autumn poems. Beautiful words and rhyme. Each couplet is beautiful to read. You have created a wonderful write. I wish you all the best in the contest. This wonderful write reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX A fave.

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/24/2018 9:15:00 PM

Lovely piece, Suzy D, and suitably melancholy for the time of year. Viv x

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/19/2018 5:38:00 PM

A very pleasant read—not contrived at all like most couplets are. I’d better read another of yours.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/15/2018 8:19:00 AM

Woah a most creative unique rendition to autumn and summer. Your color kissed poem is kissed by poetic brilliance too wow! Kudos I should be envious. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/6/2018 10:33:00 AM

Hi Suzanne, such wonderful couplets to sing the joy of Autumn. I wish you well in the contest. I love Autumn, it is my favourite season. Autumn does sing from your pen. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX This one has to be faved.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/6/2018 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Mike, for the well wishes. Autumn is really beautiful and inspiring. So nice to have you visit today. Hugs, SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2018 6:51:00 PM

wonderful entry to the contest, Suz!!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/6/2018 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/4/2018 2:07:00 PM

Autumn has truly inspired fhis lovely poem SuZ. Are the leaves changing color where you are yet? This is divine! : )

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/6/2018 6:53:00 PM

Yes Connie: Their is a golden mellow tone spreading through the leaves of our oaks. So beautiful. Hugs, SuZ

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/3/2018 6:35:00 PM

I suppose the bright side is, she gets to sleep until spring. Nicely written SuZ. Nice to see you posting again:)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 6:46:00 PM

Nice thought,Daniel: sounds like a great idea to sleep Winter way. Thanks for stopping by. SuZ

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/3/2018 2:08:00 PM

such a priceless offering, suZ.. you glow with this autumnal feast... huggs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 6:17:00 PM

Great to see you Nette: Happy my Muse comes out once in a while. Hugs, SuZ

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2018 1:19:00 PM

As beautiful as the multicolored leaves of Autumn dearest Suzanne! Good luck mon amie!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 1:48:00 PM

Hello Demetrious: Welcoming Autumn here with the inspiration it brings. Thanks for your kind visit. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/3/2018 9:46:00 AM

Beautiful verses SuZ. I enjoyed the soft tone and vivid conversation in language of autumn. Excellent lines like..Her cadence heard in whispering leaves With cooling winds she summer grieves. Best for a win at the TOP, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2018 12:05:00 PM

Hi Vijay: So happy to be writing again. I know my inspiration is in Nature. Thanks for your kind words. suZ