Dew Drops

Dew drops hang on edge One water droplet at a Time, Waiting to roll

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Marcus Crane

Date: 9/20/2009 5:13:00 AM

the picture you have created with this one is beautyful :) . Marco

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 11:55:00 PM

Well observed Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today"

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/16/2009 8:28:00 PM

a beautiful image you've painted with this write! very nice>>>>>>>>>>

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/16/2009 7:55:00 PM

lively!unique! Light & Love

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/16/2009 6:55:00 PM

A nice picture of nature! Grasps the moment in a clear way! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Johneta Ohler

Date: 9/16/2009 5:06:00 PM

i can totally picture that and put it into a painting or picture..... great write =)

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/16/2009 2:32:00 PM

Beautiful Symbolism... and such is our transient lives... Loved this one Sara MoonBee

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/16/2009 12:57:00 PM

Excellent words paint the image of that clinging drop, nice work...Raul

John Weber

Date: 9/16/2009 11:45:00 AM

Fun how you let the droplet roll to the next line, Sara. Excellent play with your words within a tight Haiku structure! Warm regards, John.