Dew

o o o o o o o o o o oo DEW oo o o o o o o o o o Drops from heaven, sprinkled delicately by God directly on flowers disappearing during daytime under sun rays designed for natural delight and refreshment. --------------------- 28.8.16

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Estela Canama

Date: 9/3/2016 2:59:00 AM

An inspiring, nature poem! Congrats, Jo. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2016 8:04:00 PM

A very well deserved win, Jo. BIG congrats.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 5:55:00 PM

Jo, an excellent description of dew! I absolutely love your 1st two lines and your entire poem flowed smoothly. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!

Joanna Daniel
Date: 9/2/2016 1:29:00 AM

Thank you,Kim:) am honoured:) may all glory be to God alone:)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 11:15:00 AM

Indeed, drops of delight for a much deserved win, Jo!! Congratulations:) ~ Regards // paul

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 9/1/2016 7:00:00 AM

Excellent plieades! Congrats! Sushma

John Hamilton

Date: 9/1/2016 6:25:00 AM

What did I tell you, a winner, I knew it! Congrats on a great poem, and a great win!

Joanna Daniel
Date: 9/2/2016 1:30:00 AM

Thank you for your predictions, John:) I enjoy your support:)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/1/2016 3:54:00 AM

Droplets of delight. Congratulations, KAi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 3:29:00 AM

- Back to congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:24:00 AM

Most refreshing little win, Jo. Well done! Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:02:00 AM

I adore seeing dew drops on flowers Jo. This is lovely! Congratulations on your high placement! ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/31/2016 10:37:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Jo. 'Designed for natural delight and refreshment'...like jewels that quench the thirst. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/31/2016 8:52:00 PM

delightful, Jo, congrats.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 7:53:00 PM

Jo, just beautiful...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2016 7:49:00 PM

A gem of a poem congrats Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2016 3:11:00 PM

So cute with the design at the top. I was going to use this word somewhere in my poem but could not find room for dew!!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/29/2016 10:06:00 AM

This is a gem, for me the winner, although only seen a few of the entries, no matter, this will be hard to beat, descriptive and nice visual depiction also. A7

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/29/2016 5:47:00 AM

Brilliantly expressed. Best wishes for the contest, Jo.

Elizabeth Larter

Date: 8/28/2016 2:25:00 PM

This is quite beautiful Jo, so very glad I stopped by for the read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2016 11:34:00 AM

- Wonderful dew, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)