Joanna Daniel Poet Pleiades

Dew

o o o o o o o o o o
    oo        DEW       oo
       o o o o o o o o o 

Drops from heaven, sprinkled
    delicately by God
      directly on flowers
        disappearing during
      daytime under sun rays
    designed for natural
delight and refreshment.

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        28.8.16

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Estela Canama September 3, 2016 at 2:59 AM An inspiring, nature poem! Congrats, Jo. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2016 at 8:04 PM A very well deserved win, Jo. BIG congrats.

Kim Merryman September 1, 2016 at 5:55 PM Jo, an excellent description of dew! I absolutely love your 1st two lines and your entire poem flowed smoothly. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings! Joanna Daniel September 2, 2016 at 1:29 AM Thank you,Kim:) am honoured:) may all glory be to God alone:)

Paul Callus September 1, 2016 at 11:15 AM Indeed, drops of delight for a much deserved win, Jo!! Congratulations:) ~ Regards // paul

Sushma A. Singh September 1, 2016 at 7:00 AM Excellent plieades! Congrats! Sushma

John Hamilton September 1, 2016 at 6:25 AM What did I tell you, a winner, I knew it! Congrats on a great poem, and a great win! Joanna Daniel September 2, 2016 at 1:30 AM Thank you for your predictions, John:) I enjoy your support:)

Kai Michael Neumann September 1, 2016 at 3:54 AM Droplets of delight. Congratulations, KAi

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 3:29 AM - Back to congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley September 1, 2016 at 12:24 AM Most refreshing little win, Jo. Well done! Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2016 at 12:02 AM I adore seeing dew drops on flowers Jo. This is lovely! Congratulations on your high placement! ; )

Sandra Haight August 31, 2016 at 10:37 PM Lovely imagery, Jo. 'Designed for natural delight and refreshment'...like jewels that quench the thirst. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe August 31, 2016 at 8:52 PM delightful, Jo, congrats.

Beautiful Scars August 31, 2016 at 7:53 PM Jo, just beautiful...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison August 31, 2016 at 7:49 PM A gem of a poem congrats Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2016 at 3:11 PM So cute with the design at the top. I was going to use this word somewhere in my poem but could not find room for dew!!

John Hamilton August 29, 2016 at 10:06 AM This is a gem, for me the winner, although only seen a few of the entries, no matter, this will be hard to beat, descriptive and nice visual depiction also. A7

Afzal Nusker August 29, 2016 at 5:47 AM Brilliantly expressed. Best wishes for the contest, Jo.

Elizabeth Larter August 28, 2016 at 2:25 PM This is quite beautiful Jo, so very glad I stopped by for the read.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2016 at 11:34 AM - Wonderful dew, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)