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Devouring Carnal Desires

Lifeless, I lie here On the bed of lust Under the beefy quilt of mounting shame With oozing hurt And fading flame To feed your lechery with drops of salaciousness Behind the closed doors of raging prurience As the rays of sun melt In the heart of burning sky I lay self down in gloom And crouch down at your sight As I bow, you drag me down To feed your hungry soul With the tender flesh Of my puerile charm And strangled glow when the moon shines Over the dying remains Of my ebbing mind ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- My interpretation of the portrait named 'Sleeping Child' http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/porfolio/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/23/2014 1:24:00 PM
Strong write that deals with an ugly side of perverted minds. You capture the scene and feelings so very well. This merits a high rating. // paul
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:47:00 PM
A belated congratulations from me and some news... Stephanie Deshpande has blogged about this contest and has posted links to the winning poems on HER PAGE ... http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/contemporary-free-rhyme-poetry-contest/ How amazing that literary art and visual art have had a meeting of minds ... too wonderful!
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Susmita Das
Date: 2/28/2014 12:52:00 AM
Thanks Cyndi :)
Date: 2/15/2014 7:52:00 PM
Very good writing, a dark subject too many are all too familiar with. Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Susmita Das
Date: 4/22/2014 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Debbie :)

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